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Comparing Seasons
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Comparing Seasons

 

Autumn leaves falling, dancing, carried by the breeze

Twirling, circling, a last goodbye to the trees

Where do they finally lay to rest?

On the ground or do they go

Gently floating downstream via the river below?

 

Sink or swim? The Salmon clamber upstream

To their spawning ground

A place of life or death those

Precious fish have found

 

Against the ebbing tide, against the river flows

The salmon find a place through waters deep and shallow

With the tide, with the flow, the leaves tumble downstream out to sea

Far from the safety of that branch upon the tree

 

© Andrea Coltman

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Comparing Seasons"
Reviewed on December 26, 2004
This was beautiful Andrea, very lovely,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart
Reviewed on December 25, 2004
I am a winter baby, Andrea. But I will always love Autumn as my favorite. Nothing compares to those burning leaves. Except maybe a special woman's eyes. Merry Christmas to you.

Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
Reviewed on December 24, 2004
This is so wonderful and so much said about the ways of life as we the leaves fall from the safety of the trees our lives go two ways one a struggle to the "top" the other just to get thru or sometimes down to go back up/regroup. This is so methodical. I love this poem and the picture, both are gorgeous.
The best of life's offerings for you and your family
Tracey

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on December 20, 2004
excellent........so authentic..........
I love the changing of the seasons

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on December 20, 2004
Superb imagery, Andrea and a captivating creation overall. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on December 20, 2004
i like the tributaries of imagery ...

Reviewed on December 20, 2004
Andrea,

Perfect!! Superb photo and write my friend - stunning work!!


Best wishes,

Robert

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on December 20, 2004
Very philisophical Andrea, and beautifully thought! the pic is awesome just gorgeous! I love your mind pondering poem!;-)
Merry Christmas to you and yours! All the best in the years to come!
love, Eileen

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on December 20, 2004
Beautiful nature write!

Reviewed by Handsum Hart
Reviewed on December 20, 2004
A very colorful and poetic write.
I wish autumn could stick around longer. Winter is one season I'd like to skip.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on December 20, 2004
Well done Andrea!!

Thanks for the beautiful greetings!!

Merry Christmas right back at you....and a million thanks for you support!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on December 20, 2004
Yup and you manage it, calmly, and expertly. No pity party. Sure do admire you...

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on December 20, 2004
A marvelous poem, Andrea. Sometimes when life unexpectedly sweeps us downstream, we have to gather our courage like the salmon and struggle to swim back upstream before we are swept away.

Wishing you and your family a Most Joyous Holiday Season.

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on December 20, 2004
Andrea, Happy Holidays to you.
Yes everything has it's seasons, nature, people, animals, they tumble through the cycles without notice of change most of the time, encountering many different pathways.
Much like the salmon you speak of, sooner or later we'll all swim that final stream.
Awesome poetry Andrea.

Lisa

Reviewed on December 20, 2004
I love this one, Andrea. I like how you've used the Salmon as an example:

One has to learn to swim well in live in order to survive.

Wishing you a Wonderful Christmas and Happy New Year!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed on December 20, 2004
An enjoyable composition, "Comparing Seasons" delivers a page of knowledge, art and beauty.

healthy Holidays, Poet!


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU


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