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Starstruck
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Star struck

 

You come over to my place

Clothes in a mess, unshaven face

How many times have I witnessed this scene?

I’m not being judgemental, not being mean

 

Star struck, wannabe

What’s the difference between you and me?

Star struck, wannabe

Full of hope and tragedy

 

But up on stage your body is next to heavenly

As your sensual voice hits all the right keys

Your audience is captivated, in awe

Your ego can remain rest assured

 

Star struck, wannabe

Living the dream, the fantasy

Star struck, wannabe

That’s the difference between you and me

 

 

 

© Andrea Coltman

 

 


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 Reviews of "Starstruck"
Reviewed on May 26, 2005
Intersting write
God Bless
Michelle!

Reviewed by Handsum Hart
Reviewed on May 25, 2005
Interesting, depending on how you look at it, this can be good and bad.

Peace

Reviewed on May 25, 2005
This reminds me of all the stars wannabe's in the American Idol. Up on stage they're like completely another person.

Good write Andrea!

Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on May 20, 2005
i'd rather be struck by stars ...

poignant poem!

Reviewed by Cathrine Hottran
Reviewed on May 19, 2005
Good write

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 19, 2005
Well expressed !!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Paul Williams
Reviewed on May 19, 2005
Excellent point well made Andrea, the world is full of wannabe's. The question is Why? are there lives so empty?

Paul;-}

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 19, 2005
You made your point perfectly!
Superb write Andrea!love the pic;-)!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on May 19, 2005
Isn't that the way, those wannabe's always
trying to steal your thing. I never wanted
to be famous just happy and some people want
to rob you of that. Great write, Andrea!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on May 19, 2005
Quite an interesting post and perspective, Andrea.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on May 19, 2005
Ah once again you capture your topic with grace and put the reader there beside you as you look at the subject of your poem and litterally dissect him and compare him to yourself, also forcing the readers to compare him to themselves. Nice work Andrea.

Felix


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