The Words I Left Unsaid (poem) by D. Alyce Domain on AuthorsDen

The Words I Left Unsaid
by D. Alyce Domain → (All Poetry by D. Alyce Domain)
Tuesday, January 24, 2017 Rated "G" by the Author.

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Romantic Rhyming poem
The words I left unsaid, are playing on my mind. They’re coursing thru my veins, and traveling up my spine. They fill my heart and soul; they’re all I think about. They were on the tip of my tongue, and nearly tumbled out. The words I left unsaid, take my breath away. They’re tangled in my hair, causing it to fray. They’re wrapped around my finger, and stuck between my toes. There’s no place that they aren’t, even the bridge of my nose. The words I left unsaid, are ringing in my ears. They crawl along my skin, and dominate my fears. They nudge me in the morning, and tuck me in at night. They wreck havoc on my nerves, and make my throat feel tight. The words I left unsaid, litter my hopes and dreams. They clog my every pore; I’m bursting at the seams. They’re expressed within my eyes; they’re held within my hand. They’re the cartilage in my bones, helping me to stand. The words I left unsaid, are with me deep inside. They’re everywhere at once, there’s nowhere I can hide. They in everything I am, they’re in everything I do. They’re the love I left unmade, they’re the words, “I love you.” Copyright © 2016 by D. Alyce Domain All rights reserved.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on January 25, 2017

Simply beautifully and regrettably written with such style and grace. This one deserves to be framed and placed over every jilted lover's dresser to remind them of their humility. Loved it! And the ending was classic.

Ron

Reviewed by Michael Schafer

Those 3 words are important to say. The other 3 are, let me help. But the most important words are, I'm sorry.
Michael D.

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Seems your body mind and spirit has accumulated many words yet to be expressed. Seeds waiting for the right conditions to blossom and bear fruit. I've learned, in my experiences, that there are some who could hear you speak (or share) a thousand words and still not understand you. And then there are others who will understand without you ever speaking a word. It's complicated. Much can be resolved, though, or put into motion, with those three words. Lovely thoughts expressed well. r