An Unexpected Valentine (poem) by Sharon Jordan on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on March 20, 2007

Daughters (I have two) will do that to you if you are fortunate. Clearly, you are. I do know that, because of my "maleness" I miss a lot. But I am working on it. Your poem helps. Thank you, Sharon. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by F William Broome

Reviewed on March 6, 2007

Your excellent title hooked us into this one. You've wirtten te kind of poem denied to most men. Daughters and sons and Dad meet in a somewhat different way... and it it our loss. Enjoyed this, and remember when the mother of our children got ushc wonderful Valentines from our "Biddies." Thanks for the memories... you make them so dellicious! - Bill

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on February 16, 2007

... And now you have the perfect envelope to seal it in, so that the two remain together forever. Precious moment beautifully reproduced in these your words and poem, Sharon. So pleased to meet you, and thank you for your comment on my poem. Have to confess to my frig STILL being covered in artwork from my babies' infancy... they are now 21 and 18! Time moves so slowly in the minds of mothers and yet so fast in their offspring. Beautiful sharing. TY Kate xx

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

Reviewed on February 13, 2007

Oh {tears} Sharon this is precious a keeper I do hope she can read this from your heart.
Happy Valentines Day
Peace,
Joselyn

Reviewed by Karen Cino

Reviewed on February 13, 2007

What a wonderful Valentine. Yes I often ask myself where has all the years have gone. Thank you for refreshing my mind, sending me back in time to the cute valentines from my now precious teenagers.

Karen

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on February 13, 2007

smiling through the tears...enchanting poem

Carole

Reviewed by Michelle Mills

Reviewed on February 13, 2007

This brought tears to my eyes...so beautiful. Michelle

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on February 13, 2007

It can't be said enough in a world that has forgotten that we should love one another as Christ loved us. You poem pulls at the heart strings.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on February 13, 2007

Awwww, leaves a lump. I'm hoping to finaaly get to see my 13 yr old son after 7 years next month..
My mind is full of such memories, HUH HUM, IN A MAN AND LADS WAY, of course..

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on February 13, 2007

A very lovely trip down memory lane, Sharon.

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on February 13, 2007

Sharon,

Sentimentally beautiful.

Reviewed by Approximately Naive

Reviewed on February 12, 2007

Nothing beats the sight and sound of our own siblings telling us that they love us.

This poem is worth prominence in a special Valentine card.

Regards
Dai

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on February 12, 2007

A sublime surprise creating wonders filling the heart with grace.

In admiration,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury

Reviewed on February 12, 2007

God,this one reminds me of my own kids little letters, Beautiful.

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on February 12, 2007

such a beautiful write my friend, penned from the heart of a loving mother...enjoyed this much!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 12, 2007

Beautiful sentiments shared....thank you!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on February 12, 2007

Very touching heart warming write, gave me the warm fussies all over. Glad you shared such a special momento.

Fee

Reviewed by Julie Donner Andersen

Reviewed on February 12, 2007

Oh Sharon...*tears*...this offering is simply raw with heartfelt emotion! Reading it was like sandpaper on my heart. I share your joy, and as a mom, I understand your intent so very well.

God bless,
Julie <> <