Magic Theme Park (poem) by John T Banasiewicz Jr on AuthorsDen

Magic Theme Park
by John T Banasiewicz Jr → (All Poetry by John T Banasiewicz Jr)
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Hope you enjoy my special piece of earth in the pic and the poem

My theme park is not a crowded space with neon lights Little piece of nature�s preserved land just right Entry fee - none required, just walk right in Closing time is when you are ready for the visit to end Massive lots of hot asphalt and miles of cars you won�t see Just a small stone covered path as the entry Thrill rides, water slides, and games of chance no way Grapevine swing, waterfall, and a little fishing all day Long wrapped lines winding back and forth like toys No lines just lush green grass to lie on and enjoy Sun beating down from the sky need for more sun block Nature�s sun block here is oak treetops Soda and bottle water four-dollar cash register rings Use your hand as a cup to drink from the clear cool spring Candy, hot dogs, popcorn all junk food known to man Fresh fruit and vegetables all we eat grown on the land Yes my theme park is not exciting nor draws millions to see Just God�s creatures and a simple plain guy like me John Thomas Banasiewicz Copyright 2004

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on February 24, 2005

good one

Reviewed by Anniemoh Ohio

Reviewed on June 5, 2004

A brilliant expression and description of nature and what it has to offer.

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)

Reviewed on May 31, 2004

This is a wonderful theme park to disappear into...great write...Fletcher B

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

i felt at home as my feet roamed your verses through this beautiful pic back home as a child my playground often were pastures or fields of this same pic refreshing like coming home Thomas ..

TY Lady Peg

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on May 30, 2004

You have discovered one of the best amusement parks in the world, and luckily, I managed to find one, too.

Thanks for reminding us so eloquently, that the best things in life, are, indeed,free.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on May 29, 2004

(((john)))

and no admission fee! :) beautifully written, john--i'm on my way

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Now this is the kind of theme park I love!
Nature at its best! Beautiful write Tommy!
I love the imagery, made me feel so good!;-)

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Sounds like a wonderful place. Nice write.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Beautiful and uplifting write, Tommy, but I happen to love those roller coasters! LOL

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Rose L

Knowing you and how much you adore your land, I can truly appreciate the beauty of this poem. Your heart bursts out of every line.

I love the juxtaposition of your theme park vs. Disneyworld, Universal Studies, Etc. Living in Orlando, Florida I mean I can REALLY appreciate the calm and serenity of your theme park - especially during tourist season which seems to be nearly year round anymore.

Loved the image and the idea both. Well done.

~Rose~

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Beautiful Inspiring write Tommy....but I think that grass will make

me itchy rolling in it...lol!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by A PAX

my highest compliment to you!!! wish I wrote it!!

saving it!
pax.......A

Reviewed by Denise Edwards

Awe! Such an inspiring, loving write! A wonderful praise for our Creator, and His awe-inspiring wonders!