Majestic Mermaid (poem) by John T Banasiewicz Jr on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Sandra Corona

Reviewed on February 5, 2008

Fantastic fantasy? Uh, about those scales ... ???

Sandy

Reviewed by Rose Loya

Reviewed on June 11, 2007

I love old fashioned writings like these, so romantic.

Rose

Reviewed by Silke Lance, Dr. Ph (Reader)

Reviewed on December 5, 2004

*Bravo*

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on July 7, 2004

"Majestic Mermaid" is a touching inspiring sensual poetic composition.
It flows through the waves of the ocean of desires.

Keep posting, Poet.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on June 17, 2004

John, a very soft, gentle, and dreamy poem. Oh if it were only that easy. Bill Murray

Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)

Reviewed on June 16, 2004

an excellent write.

Reviewed by Cynthia Castle (Reader)

Reviewed on June 16, 2004

Very eloquent write, Dear Poet! ...What a beautiful romantic dream!

More Sweet Dreams to you,
Cynthia

Reviewed by Rose L

Reviewed on June 14, 2004

I love both the appeal and the vivid imagery of each line.....this is a poem that is almost a plea.....one can only hope that the mermaid hears the plea and responds. I feel certain she will. Well done!!

~Rose~

Reviewed by Carmel Victor

Reviewed on June 14, 2004

Very inspirational and creative. Thanks for sharing your talent with us.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on June 14, 2004

Fantastic mystical write!

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on June 14, 2004

(((tommy)))

flows beautifully, this write--BRAVO!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on June 14, 2004

masterful write, tommy! well done, my friend! BRAVO!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your tx. friend, karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on June 14, 2004

superb imagery to this wonderfully flowing poem ... a delight to read!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on June 14, 2004

Beautifully passionate and whimsical.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on June 14, 2004

A marvelous dream; a wonderful poem, Tommie. May all your dreams come true!

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)

Reviewed on June 14, 2004

This is so romantic and beautiful, John!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on June 14, 2004

Just very beautiful!!

Romantic piece!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on June 13, 2004

This was beautiful, very lovely and so romantic!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)

Reviewed on June 13, 2004

Wow! Sexy poem, very romantic- I would love to be a mermaid, so i can relate to this idea- nice write:)

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)

Reviewed on June 13, 2004

Nicely done John...excellent imagery here in your poem...Fletcher B

Reviewed by Jim Dunlap

Reviewed on June 13, 2004

Reminds me of a poem I wrote about a mermaid once, only they ate the guy. :)

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 13, 2004

A surrealistic fantasy poem, very lovely Tommy!

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on June 13, 2004

Greetings Poet John Banasiewicz Jr.

You have created a marvelous backdrop by blending yourself, the ocean and your lovely �Majestic Mermaid� into a beautiful piece of poetry, Poet!!! I enjoyed the read very much. I am truly sorry I haven�t responded sooner, I haven�t forgotten about you. I promise, I will before the end of tomorrow night. I have been swamped the past few weeks. Thank you for posting this incredible piece, Poet!!!

My gratitude, respect and admiration.

Thomas Lanechanger

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on June 13, 2004

So beautiful this one is fantasy AND ROMANCE JUST GORGEOUS JOHN!