Photograph of one of my Dalmatian puppies at two days old.
I’m tired
I don’t feel
As though
I can write
My mind
Is tired
Not wanting
To think
At this moment
Words are
Spilling out
From my
Exhausted fingers
On to this page
Why can’t
I stop this?
I’m tired
I just want
To sleep
Not think
Not write
Something
Inside me is
Egging me on
Keeping me writing
Making me write
But
I am tired
And just want
To go to sleep
Perhaps
One more line
But
I’m tired
Not an animal lover...but a lover of good poetry..and this is good..
Jenni
Reviewed by Robert JudeAce
Reviewed on March 19, 2002
better get a good sleep, those pups are going to keep you going ;)
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on March 19, 2002
I know the feeling, that's a cute pup.
Reviewed by Amanda A.
Reviewed on March 19, 2002
So Cute!
Reviewed by Gregory Sonn (Reader)
Reviewed on March 19, 2002
You are truely an artist my friend and that's why you push when you think stop.
I know the feeling and this was very good for a tired lady! Great job. Gregg
Oh you have brought back memories. When I was a kid ... 100's of years ago ... we had a part dalmation and she had a billion puppies ... they looked like that ... I remember how soft and wiggley they were and how much I loved their sweet puppy breath ... sigh ,, thanks for the trip down memory lane
Perhaps "..Quiet Storm" will help rekindle old flames buried and long forgotten or express the love so deeply locked inside of your soul longing to be released.
Regardless of where you may be found in love this beautiful masterpiece can be
Blessings, Janet xoxoxoxo
Good as always...!
Blue eyed fish...
Jenni
I know the feeling and this was very good for a tired lady! Great job. Gregg
~~michael~~