Finally Peaceful
My passion is like the oceans and the sands, even from a distance you’re all that I can see, my soul seeks for the comfort of your hands, so that we may travel together into eternity.
Desires like the waves ripple upon the shore, distance does not fade the memory of you, within my tender hands your soul I'll store, into eternity I know it will be the golden hue.
I see your beautiful reflection in my dreams, and can hear your voice singing in my mind, whispering sounds of loves gentle streams, ‘n I continue to yearn for more of you to find.
That is my soul that in your dreams you see, my voice is carried across the magic sphere, in whispers, it sings of tenderness and glee, soon disappears the yearning, and I'll appear.
My heartbeat is like a wave upon the rock, your benevolence has opened the shroud, now it waits for your tenderness to unlock, ‘cause your love will free me from the crowd.
Gentle your heart and yet so strong it beats, my love it opened up your guarded core, tenderness now flows until you feel replete, for you will know it's you I veritably adore.
For it has hid from the wounds of an evil world, yet you have released it into paradise so deep, causing my emotions to run rampant and swirl, knowing to be held in your arms, I’ll finally sleep.
Loving unconditionally the demons ceased to be, in perfect happiness we found life to be blissful, joy discovered, the motions that set emotions free, our comforting embrace knowing we are peaceful!
Copyright ã 2004 Thomas Lanechanger All Rights Reserved
Copyright 2004 Elga ~Indigo~ All Rights Reserved |
I wish all lovers could feel these two first lines of "Finally Peaceful...":
"My passion is like the oceans and the sands,
even from a distance you’re all that I can see,"
Thank You two for sharing grace through Your poetic art.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
You wrote the highest tide and the eventual peace with knowing expressions. This was a pleasure to read... and to respond to. katy xox.
Reindeer
I see your beautiful reflection in my dreams,
and can hear your voice singing in my mind,
whispering sounds of loves gentle streams,
‘n I continue to yearn for more of you to find.
Elga , your romantic writes are breathtaking...and one thing...Thomas is a special poet too...so if you guys continue work together we can read loads of masterpieces...clap clap clap....cheers...love n luck...Kudos to both of you....BHUWAN!!!
Congratz on a successful collaboration!!
Love Tinka
Words fit together like a hand in glove.
Enjoyed this!
Lisa
loved this
My heartbeat is like a wave upon the rock,
your benevolence has opened the shroud,
now it waits for your tenderness to unlock,
‘cause your love will free me from the crowd.
a poem! Kudo's!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn in texas. :D
I think it is wonderful that you two have collaborated on a poem, since I truly love reading both of your works! You both know that I love this poem! A Brilliant collaboration! This is such a mesmerizing, romantic write! …very serene and the graphics enhance it beautifully! I am amazed at the superb flow throughout the entire poem. Your words flow together magically. Thanks for sharing your combined talents!
Love,
Cynthia
breathtaking, sensual delight! a most marvelous collaboration! BRAVA! BRAVO!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla dorman, lady of the Lights :)