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Indomitable Spirit ( Tres Linhas )
by Peter Paton → (All Poetry by Peter Paton)
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Tres Linhas (Three Lines) is a new form of poetry written in three lines which must all rhyme in syllables of 5, 6 & 7, respectively and should contain imagery that celebrates some sort of connection between nature and spirit...


"At  the going down of the sun, we will remember them

..............................................................................................

 

Though my body is gone

my spirit will linger on

at the breaking of each dawn

 

Copyright by Peter Paton 2006
  

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Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on October 3, 2006
You have said so much
so well and so compact here
you do this style with attention...............

Reviewed on June 21, 2006
O, Peter, this reeks power and conviction! BRAVA; extremely well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :)

Love the picture! God bless America again, and God bless England!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on June 21, 2006
Quite powerful, Peter.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on June 20, 2006
the body does not house the soul, the soul houses the body ...

excellent, Peter!

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on June 20, 2006
Rebirth with everyday...intense!
Susan

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on June 20, 2006
Crushing, hopeful and passionate...your three lines say so much.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on June 20, 2006
Trio
Tribute
Thankyou

Sage

Reviewed on June 20, 2006
Peter:
Powerful write here
God Bless
Michelle!

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on June 20, 2006
Yes Peter, this almost has a universal feel to it and could apply to many different situations. Strong statement!

These little three line buggers can be challenging man!

Richard

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on June 20, 2006
A wonderful array of Tres Linhas on the Board tonight for us to enjoy... and amazing just how much ground they can cover and how diverse they can be whilst each remaining faithful to the constraints. Our remembrances tuck us down at night and awaken us each morning. Pure gold this is, as is each heart and soul that has been lost but endures. Bless you, Kate xx

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on June 20, 2006
Wonderful new form I have learned and I love the way you wrote this Peter it will linger in my mind.

Love,
Joselyn

Reviewed by Chrissy McVay
Reviewed on June 20, 2006
Very good.

Reviewed on June 20, 2006
Very beautiful! So much said, so much touched and so many deeply moved with only three short lines!
B&R

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on June 20, 2006
I hope we keep that spirit alive in us and remember the sacrifice they have made for us..

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on June 20, 2006
Oh my this is priceless!!

Great write Peter!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on June 20, 2006
excellent, i need to look into this form more

Reviewed by Taylor Ryan
Reviewed on June 20, 2006
A sensitive and emotional tribute with a delicate glimmer of hope, Peter. I was running an errand earlier today when a man in line ahead of me mentioned to the clerk in conversation,oddly enough,something that had been on my mind all the morning...and to paraphrase...'Something negative, or devastating in nature can in turn, produce something positive. With faith,healing and renewal, and in my own experience, I know, and have experienced vividly, the truth of those words. I know those you honor hear your special words.
Love,
Taylor ~

Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia
Reviewed on June 20, 2006
Glory......Hallelujah! Thank you for this, Peter. love, Rhonda

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on June 20, 2006
A real salute to fallen soldiers, seamen and airmen everywhere.

Fee

Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader)
Reviewed on June 20, 2006
This is precious and so divine...Your heart is so rare and so huge, Peter. We shall meet with the Shepherd eye to eye, as the living water is our garment of praise, His rod and staff give us courage. No we will not ever fear that valley of the shadow..He leads us in the reflections to restore our souls..

Peace & Love,
Dove

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on June 20, 2006
Yes. Most definately.


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