Paranoia (poem) by Danielle Mundy on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Hanley Harding (Reader)

Reviewed on May 3, 2005

Of course you're not... none of us really IS... right...?

Hanley

Reviewed on January 18, 2005

Detailed, gripping, edge of the seat, eyes covered kind of write. Could be made into a page turner novel.

Awesome, scary writing,
Pier

Reviewed by Henry Lefevre

Reviewed on January 17, 2005

This is a nice emotional piece. Have you sold many pieces in this genre? You do have the talent.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on January 17, 2005

I know the feelings. Well done, Danielle. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by John Bidwell

Reviewed on January 17, 2005

Great imagination, and thank God that's all it is.
Awesome job!
John

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on January 17, 2005

powerfully expressed. engaging piece of work, Danielle. photo is tops!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on January 17, 2005

Lol For the "Note"...but I thought I reconized you as my roommate....lol!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson

Reviewed on January 16, 2005

This is a very good replay of what replays over and over and over every day in the minds of the lost. You did a most excellent job in capturing this element.

Allen

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on January 16, 2005

Hey, Danielle, if you don't want those wonderful drugs, send them to me...if they make you this nuts, I want to experience some of it too...LOL! Ed

Reviewed by Sara Coslett

Reviewed on January 16, 2005

Danielle, you have completely captured the pain that people who are truly insane suffer with on a daily basis. It is something most of us cannot even imagine. At least not until now. Excellent work. ~ Sara

Reviewed by Danielle Mundy

Reviewed on January 16, 2005

Sorry, had to respond to Anne...I can't help watching the freaky movies, Stephen King is my idol!!!! (though his books are a trillion times better than the movies could ever hope to be :) )

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green

Reviewed on January 16, 2005

Haunting and vivid. I feel that the poem is a kind
of metaphor for a deep and inexpressible {if usually
unconscious} fear that lurks inside most, if not all,
of us. 'Pea' <3

Reviewed by Anniemoh Ohio

Reviewed on January 16, 2005

Dani, how many times have I told you to stop watching those freaky movies! LOL Your imagination definitely ran wild on this one.

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on January 16, 2005

LOL. When they think it's true, you've written a good tale.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on January 16, 2005

Danielle this is fantastic, it grips from start to finish, and wants more;-)the pic adds to the mood...excellent work superb visuals!

Love, Eileen

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on January 16, 2005

i could visualize this quite easily ... does that mean i'm mad or that you write very good poetry?

Reviewed by Dan Zuewski (Reader)

Reviewed on January 16, 2005

enjoyed this... very vibrant even given the subject matter... and while the "story" may not be about you personally... the emotions running through it I'm sure had to come from somewhere within you... sometimes the best thing is to let it out on paper (or electronically) before it gets too bad... again, great stuff ;)

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on January 16, 2005

Well you sure described it perfectly and I know from experience and as a retired nurse.

Reviewed by James Daniels

Reviewed on January 16, 2005

Oh I've delt with this too many time before. You and I and many others strugle with this daily.~Jd keep sharing, great work

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on January 16, 2005

Such feeling cannot be feigned Danielle and my heart reaches out to you. These feelings may be real only to the sufferers but to them there is no safety, no hiding place no security..only fear. You have captured this sickness well Danielle and I hope you find the friend in the darkness.

Felix