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Breaking Down
by Danielle Mundy → (All Poetry by Danielle Mundy)
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Little down tonight...


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Sinking down
I wear my frown
For all the world
to see
Given up
I've had no luck
Purging the ugliness
within me
Anger raging
Spite engaging
Fading dreams die
quiet in the night
Depression sets in
Where to begin
Need to make all
again alright
Sinking down
I wear my frown
Inside so no one
can see
I've given up
Had no luck
Realizing the hopes
Harbored within me
 

 


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 Reviews of "Breaking Down"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 28, 2005
Dear Dani. I can so relate to this write of yours. It is a most compelling offering. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Handsum Hart
Reviewed on January 20, 2005
I have these down too. Be strong

"We would never learn to be brave and patient, if there was only joy in our world."
Helen Keller, in struggle.


Reviewed by Pier Tyler
Reviewed on January 18, 2005
We've all felt down, so, you're not alone. Writing it down puts things into perspective for me. Especially when it's a year later, gosh, I smile, I can't believe how I got through it.

This is wonderful, yet full of emotions, write.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 18, 2005
Well written Danielle...welcome to the club!!

Love tinka

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on January 17, 2005
We all have days like this, don't give up.....a excellent write..

Carole

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 17, 2005
Excellant write, the day to day world can wear even the strongest of us down.

Felix

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on January 17, 2005
when we're feeling down is the time we have to work the hardest at projecting positive attitudes ... each time we become a little stronger ...

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on January 17, 2005
great write oon the emotion of depression. HOping you are feeling better soon.

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on January 17, 2005
Yes Jay is right but hey I get this way myself really I do.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 17, 2005
Hope my poem didn't contribute Danielle;-) I feel down
tonight too lets have a drink, I'm buying!I'll call
little Eddie and Randy ndy they tell great jokes;-)

Excellent write for the mood!
Love, Eileen


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