Torn (poem) by Danielle Mundy on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on March 29, 2005

Save all the pieces you can - in your head, in your heart, in your words. Beautiful poem in a small space. I love this! -- Jeff

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on March 29, 2005

The pieces are still there,
They shan't be cast away,
They dance amid the flowers till
We gather them, in love, one day.

Love, Light, Joy, Peace & Creativity,
Joseph

Reviewed by D May (Reader)

Reviewed on March 28, 2005

Danielle, this is a wonderful write. The message here is clear, however, you strike me as woman who always hops back on that horse and is able to gracefully ride out the storm. Excellent work as always.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on March 26, 2005

Introspective write, Danielle; and well-expressed and thus shared. Thank you for this offering to which I can relate very well. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by L. Figgins

Reviewed on March 25, 2005

Many will relate to this pensive write, Danielle. We moarn our younger selves as we were bright, carefree and living in the moment. I turn around and she seems like another person, as if I had split into two halves. But it wasn't all sweetness and light. So much confusion! With our current wisdom we need to somehow capture some of the wonder...

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on March 25, 2005

very insightful write!

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on March 25, 2005

How many mundy's in a week?
We can't turn the clock back, but we sure can rewind it...

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on March 25, 2005

God, this sounds like the story of my life. Who knew...

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 25, 2005

Oh Daniella I can so much relate to this!!

Warm Hugs and love!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on March 25, 2005

poignant read

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on March 25, 2005

I can truly feel your pain here Danielle and wish I could reach out and help you in your search, though I can't, I wish you well and hope for your success.

Felix

Reviewed by Anniemoh Ohio

Reviewed on March 24, 2005

I think we are all torn up and rebuilt from time to time. Wonderful, heartfelt write. And beautiful picture! I don't think I ever saw that one.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 24, 2005

Bittersweet the memories we must live with Danielle.
If we only knew we would have made them sweeter;-)
Hindsight! Splendid poem, very moving!

etw