Buried Treasure
By: Rose Rideout and Felix Perry
In the silence of the thunder
In the silent echoes of the mind
Where the sunshine never touches
Lives a love that’s strong but blind
Hidden there like pirate’s treasure
That no one else can find
Packed in her chest like hardened oak
Desires hidden from worldview
A love that builds with strength
Shared by just a chosen few
Feelings meant only to be shared
By the beating of hearts so true
Tomorrows just a wish unfulfilled
Yesterdays a thing of past…
In a love that no one shares
Dark shadows shallow cast
Hide the teardrops of denied amour
Till time takes it’s toll at last.
Myrna
A treasure for certain!
Rose and FEE, you write magnificantly TOGETHER!
Your ending brings tears!
FAith+Hope= Happiness
STay Positive!
STay SAFE!
Namaste!
WArm hugs and love, Warrior Lady Sheeeoox
Jules
Well done!!
Love Tinka
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"
On this stunning view of poetic thoughts
On buried treasures a very unique piece from
Two Excellent poets A beauty of a treasure poem was born
Stunning job..Fee / Rose Love Peace and Joy...Morning Star
Love & hugs to you both on your combined words
Regis
Ahhh~sings beautifully smile
Wonderful collaboration expresses deep seeded emotions, I have enjoyed the peeks into the heart and mind~
The best to you two~continued blessings and enlightenments!
From the Heart...
love each and every stanza
you are both gifted, the words are magic
very inspirational
unfortunatly it came out sounding like a country song.
But hey Ya'll, I do live in Georgia.
Walt
Eureka, I have found IT! Buried treasure in beautiful, beautiful lines; well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D