We are finally all moved in and I am once again finding time to sit back a little and let my mind and my imagination wander, hope you like the results...
Autumn Stroll
We watched the falling leafs on an autumn breeze
little rainbows, kissing skin, Monarch butterflies
in the crisp air, I savour, the natural scent of you
that makes
place your hand on my breast and feel heartbeats
the beats of
feel my weight
provocative joining of hip
above us
our offered
soft moans, trembling
sweet fall, making love, no need for where or whys
me shudder with needful tender sighsmy heart can offer no foolproof alibisenveloping you, melting into you to hip, thighs to thighsthe white skeletons of trees…naked nowvoices are a sacrifice to midday skiesgroans, love words gushed
Let me get this straight..U go for an Autumn stroll and wind up talking nawwty... MATE!! No brilliant write as always, im just in a very mischevious mood tonight..
CP
I love the feel of this poem, and it has some really brilliant lines, though I admit to not being crazy about the color changes in the lines because these lines are so well-written and descriptive, that in a smaller, black font, their impact would be more noticable instead of the color slapping you in the face right away. Just my humble opinion. I love the poem itself though, it is one of your best.
I am glad you are moved in & getting settled Fee!!
I love the colors of the flowinbg words...the transitions of the words of two hearts melding upon "Autumn Stroll"
Peace & Blessings
Vickie
Glad that you have completed the move...and moreso have time for your imaginative wanderings! How beautifully expressed in this Autumn Stroll, Fee. Has a wondrous cooling effect, even in our 95degF heat herein Texas :o)
Blessings and Love - Micke
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Sheila
I love the colors of the flowinbg words...the transitions of the words of two hearts melding upon "Autumn Stroll"
Peace & Blessings
Vickie
Blessings and Love - Micke
Hugs,
Anna
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Chrissie
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D (Cooler now, but still a bit too hot for my tastes)
Autumn could be warmer!
Georg
Love ya face Cuz XOXOXO, Rose