I pictured four women on a veranda
four Southern women in straw colored hats
and gauzy dresses with lace coverd fans
They were having a conversation, and it was hot
Their hankies were tucked in cleavages
where eternal trickles of perspiration ran
from the female breast bone to exotic vacation spots
that Southern men often dream about
~~
These Southern ladies were a mixutre
of cotton candy and pink champagne,
part calico choir girl
and part satin dance hall doll
~~
They were sweet smelling, coy, cunning
voluminous, veracious, delicious
these earth sisters, these rebel mothers
they're vexing, sexy and pernicious
Women who belonged to another time
where writing a letter was by an exquisite hand
before flirting became extinct
and ladies still blushed behind their fans
~~
Like a whim of Scarlet they turned suddenly
as their conversation waned
shutting the door with the bolt of a latch
Leaving behind the longing to join them but
instead only an abandoned hankerchief
to be picked up, to savor the perfumed shadows
of these women, these Southern women
Words to take one back into the tunnel of time to where appearances were all, before the world came crashing down upon that generation, and the amenities were crushed and lost forever. Kudos, Carole.
Peace.
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on November 22, 2004
You know I had to love this one, Scarlet still lives in the hearts of some of us!
Quite the scene for the southern belle..back when ladies were ladies and gentlemen called only by first asking Father if it were okay with him.
Give those ladies a warm southern breeze and you'll have beaus coming in from every direction!
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Your poetic style flows with beauty and grace - another absolutely stunning poem ... superb!!
Best regards,
Robert
passionate & beautiful ...
Southern Belle
In my respectable point of view.
Their voices just rip
through my heart and soul.....lol
William ....Peace
Nothing like our southern lasses..
Excellent verbal visit to times - far gone. - Bill
Peace.
Give those ladies a warm southern breeze and you'll have beaus coming in from every direction!
I liked this Carole.
Lisa