Evening Shadows
The night was warm and soft
thick with stars
hanging low over a river
appearing as a faint metallic thread
that wound its way through the dark
The moon was the narrowest
of silver silvers overhead
a pale smear on the night
blinking coyly down
playing hide and seek
behind a screen of shifting clouds
Tree branches rustling casting shadows
that swayed and danced
upon the wooden deck
in eerie time to a hint of music
drifting on a breeze
Flickering candlelight
cast the couple’s shadows behind them
to drape upon the wall
As they watched
the shadows raise spectral wine glasses
the wall catching their red glow
© Carole Mathys
7/20/09
nice...
Anna
Most enjoyable write
Love & peace be with you
William
EDWIN
Mark
Georg
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Richly atmospheric from first to last, the images hold and sustain the reader as well as sustaining the poem itself, and the last three lines are of exceptional quality.
John
hugs
fee
as shadows of lovers are as one on this moon washed evening.
-gene.
Be always safe,
Karen
Regis