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Song of the Black Skylark

by Aberjhani — Read all 107 poems by Aberjhani

Dedicated with gratitude to the good folks of Savannah who voted me best local poet and spoken word artist in the 2006 CONNECT SAVANNAH readers' poll. (Black Skylark Art by Postered Poetics)

Saturday, May 20, 2006


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Have you heard the song of the black skylark?
That creature of burning black leaves
found often at midnight on top the gleaming sphere
of Savannah’s city hall.
Or sometimes just outside the windows
of those about to die or those being born.


People tell tales, and tales
adorn themselves with legend.
There is one story about a waitress,
she was somebody’s mama and daughter,
about 20 or 30, half Muslim, half Jewish,
on her way home walking down Bay street
around 3 a.m. when a manbeast strolled
out of an alley and struck her to the ground.
His thick hands had already torn through
her blouse, and pointed teeth like razors
sliced her skirt and muscular thighs.
A naked rage jutted from his crotch
and dripped hot ignorance all over
the woman’s exposed flesh.  Just above
the street where they struggled, there in the window
of a second-floor apartment was another 
man and woman watching the manbeast
rattle fury all over the screaming waitress.
They watched until overtaken by a heat
that slammed them banging against the windowsill.


And that was when the sound came.

It curved like a screeching arrow
arching up out of the river behind city hall
but at the same time that sound fell,
like a smoking moon shouting out prophecies,
it rolled down the street like a hurricane of jazz singers
and exploded out the sky like a god of love
o
utraged by the shadow of his own apathy.
The street shook and the manbeast emptied like a pig.
In the middle of their kiss, the couple in the window
erupted nausea from one mouth to the other.

The song of the black skylark blossomed
into a tidal wave of molten earth
that swallowed the manbeast whole
and flooded the window of the blissless couple
like a huge shroud of death stink with horror.
When silence descended over the street
the waitress lay on her back thinking she was dead.
Then slowly her eyes opened.  She claimed later
that a large black bird, something other
than crow or a raven, was standing on top
of a man’s skull.  One arm of the skeleton
pointed up as if in recognition  of a vision.
This bird, she said, suddenly flared like a heaven

then shrunk into a silhouette against the full moon.

From that impossible distance she could hear the bird
until the flow of its roar pulled her to her feet
and she looked up again, this time to see two more

skeletons fallen against a window in an apartment
above the street.  Like anybody would have done,
she began to run.  As she went past city hall
the bird landed on its dome and began singing.

Many people said they both heard and saw it
just as the sun was rising.  And the rain that fell
from a clear sky that morning, they all claimed, were the tears
of the sun, and that bird, weeping for the dead.

 

by Aberjhani
(from Visions of Skylark Dressed in Black)


 
 
 

 

 

 

 



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Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on November 8, 2006
You are an awesome talent!

Elizabeth

Reviewed by Joyce Hale
Reviewed on July 5, 2006
My word, Aberjhani, your writing is incredible! Excellent!

Peace.

Reviewed by rite
Reviewed on June 18, 2006
Incremental poetry, acellerating from an every day situation to bizarre and abstract situations of other places and times. I guess it takes most minds to realms never visited before. The black bird continues to fly.

RAge

Reviewed by Judy Meeker
Reviewed on June 18, 2006
I do love folklore. I am from the south. My book is a chilling tale of a ghost child. I like birds.
Judy Meeker

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on June 17, 2006
So good, I am tongue-tied. Fingers hover over keys, knowing they
are not going to find superlatives that are great enough. TOO
good. . .impossible not to be jealous of your talents. Way you
have developed and honed them! ~~ As for Savannah, I fell in
love with the city the minute I saw it. Now I am more determined
than ever to go back. As for the award, it was a shoe-in...shoo-in?
Forgot how to spell it! Speaking of spells, you weave a mighty one. . .just when I think you've reached the epitome, you top
yourself. Make me want to work harder and study more. Congratulations and . . .t h a n k s !!! 'Pea' <3

Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed
Reviewed on June 16, 2006
Most striking lines for me. . . ( and all of it is good)

". . . but at the same time that sound fell,
like a smoking moon shouting out prophecies,
it rolled down the street like a hurricane of jazz singers
and exploded out the sky like a god of love
outraged by the shadow of his own apathy."

It would be an honor for any writer to be mentored by you and the way you makes poem-stories come to life with such social significance. This was wonderful. . . apologize for not being able to read more (big cruise sale starting in our business, you know how that goes!) but I needed to take some time and just be "here" again, in 'your corner of the den."

Blessin's, and many wonderful congratulations for being recognized by ConnectSavannah. I know others will be encouraged by your example. (I, for one, am encouraged Bro. A.)

cynth'ya

Reviewed on June 14, 2006
IT IS ALWAYS A PLEASURE TO READ SUCH LOVELY ARTISTIC AND EXCELLENT WORK. KUDOS ALEJA BENNETT

Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on June 11, 2006
Words catch in my throat, Aberjhani--having been horrified, repulsed, traumatized, bewitched and ultimately redeemed from this work of ART (my humble estimation). Brutal and beautiful in one breath--my breath having been held throughout and my heart peirced
with a remembrance of Christ and His burden of bearing the sins of the world and the darkness that day described in metaphor. Incredible poetry. (Must have this book. Ashamed that I haven't purchased it by now.) Congrats on those fine people of Savannah declaring their good taste in art!

Lin

Reviewed by The Smoking Poet
Reviewed on June 9, 2006
And to these tales and legends, you add your own poetic magic, wrapping even ugliness and horror in a cloak of words that somehow shimmer and provide hope, if only because man who creates will always outshine man who destroys.

Reviewed by Muhammad Al Mahdi
Reviewed on June 3, 2006
Tjhis is an intrigueing and mighty work that reaches almost delirious heights of vision. Its a transformation of notions and metaphors into a surreal sphere which is at the same time attractive and repelling, dreamspherelike, in a terrific manner. I cannot as at now say much in terms of interpretation since only the subconscious can penetrate into this world and, caused by its nature, requires time to appropriate it.

Reviewed by Amy Avatar (Reader)
Reviewed on May 25, 2006
Aberjhani, I am
in total awe of your talents. I especially
love these lines, "A naked rage jutted from his crotch
and dripped hot ignorance all over
the woman’s exposed flesh". Your
striking word mural hypnotizes me to
look at it again and again.
Amy

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on May 25, 2006
Aberjhani, you have, without a doubt, a rare gift of mesmerizing expression! I am always honored to read your splendid creations. Congratulations on your much deserved win as best local poet and spoken word artist in the 2006 Connect Savannah readers' poll.

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on May 23, 2006
Wow
blows me away.
pax A

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 23, 2006
Such a wild imagination...

Ron

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on May 23, 2006
Silenced by the power of this write and wide-eyed at Nordette's knowledgeable response, I can only curtsey deeply and acknowledge that all in the world of arts' recognition is as it should be, even if in the world injustice still reigns. But this write releases the scent of indignant justice like a sweet-smelling nosegay to permeate the stench of unrighteous death and to let the blood of innocent suffering. May your voice continue to be empowered to speak, enlighten and liberate. I humbly bow the knee. TY and bless you, Kate xx And many congatulations.

Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore
Reviewed on May 22, 2006
This is commentary on the crass nature of our society, how so many revel in the pain and suffering of others, in the attempt to alleveiate their own pain and suffering. empty is such an apt way to describe it..filling mundane existing with anything so as not to have to search within to find self...sifting through layers and layers of filth and dis-ease...congratulations upon your election, it is your blessing and your due...peace, Brotha A.

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
Reviewed on May 22, 2006
I read this last night and read it once more today. Your words reach out in such a powerful force and draw me into your world and vision. Not many do that, but you do. Congratulations on the honor of being Savannah’s poet of the year…

Allen

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on May 21, 2006
yup..it's IN there..
my library of course!!
superb write..but then again all your writes ARE!!

Master Poet Aberjhani..

Vesna

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on May 21, 2006
This story is more than captivating, I saw myself leaning against a street lamp appearing as a ghost beneath its glowing brightness. I was watching the story unfold, but I was stuck in a timewarp and unable to change what had to occur. Legends often have their roots in reality and my mind wants to accept that this is such a leggend.
Excellent, Aberjhani!
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Paul Williams
Reviewed on May 21, 2006
Congratulations on a much deserved honour my friend. This magnificent offering is going into my library for me to savour over and over. Your imagery and metaphor, confirm your ability with the written word is without question. May the Skylark sing loud and proud for many years to come.

Paul;-)

Reviewed by Martin Hebert (Reader)
Reviewed on May 21, 2006
~~Aberjhani~~beautiful poem from the soul of a wonderful poet..my emotions run full throttle after reading..~~

~~martin~~

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on May 21, 2006
a poem born of the heart and grown from reason ... congrats on a weel-deserved honor ...

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on May 20, 2006
Dear Aberjhani:
So many things come to mind as I read the poem "Song of the Black Skylark." The thought that rushed me first when I read it months ago was, "WOW! That brother has one kick-butt announcement. What an exceptionally bold presentation of his essence as artist and clarion to the masses!" Reading the poem again tonight in light of your being chosen by Connect Savannah's readership as the best poet and spoken word artist in your city and in light of your choosing this poem to say thank you to your fellow Savannahians, I am struck by its metaphor--the woman as city, her heritage a blend of strife and uneasy blood, unprotected and left to a rape by humanity's baser motivations. Furthermore, those who should help only gawk to arousal, getting off on her misfortunes. The song of the poet is a a cry for justice, one loud enough to balance the scales, and a gift of healing that transforms and brings peace through poetic evocation. Oh, I could say more, reflecting on the artist Pleasant's honor by the city, on the implications of Dr. Mack's anthropological work and Savannah's reinterpretation of tortured history, and you still in your hometown, living long enough to see sweet recognition. I could ponder the meanings, but I won't. I'll leave you to your good news and say congratulations again. It seems you were born for such a time as this. The people have chosen well. You are a marvel. :-) ~~Peace. Nordette

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 20, 2006
Congratulations Aberjhani! Anyone with your aawesome talent must be recognized! This piece shouts voiceless epithets in silent screams,being repressed from fear of all out rage. Sometimes such abominations can't be outwardly expressed.

Eileen

Reviewed by Chrissy McVay
Reviewed on May 20, 2006
Intense! Very good, I like the 'hurricane of jazz singers' analogy...

Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader)
Reviewed on May 20, 2006
My dear poet man, your extremly talented!!!! More poems please...Excellent imagery your brain see's, dearest one...

xxxx dove

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on May 20, 2006
The images conjured in SONG OF THE BLACK SKYLARK is the alchemical key to misfortune and injustice. It is through the spoken and written word in which the process of alchemy takes the bad events and causes good to come out of them. It is the process clearly outlined in SONG OF THE BLACK SKYLARK in which suffering produces perserverence, character, and hope. The alchemy of this poem transforms the common element of suffering into the precious gold of hope. Congratulations on your poetry and spoken word nomination, Aberjhani.

With respect,
Sage

Reviewed on May 20, 2006

Flashing through my imagination, "Song of the Black Skylark" played a full lenght motion picture for the audience of the intelligences of my brain.

I salute You, Poet.


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on May 20, 2006
Aberjhani
A tour de force of epic literary proportions...
You truly deserve your nomination as Savannah's leading poet, as you communicate supremely words of passion and eloquence with sheer beauty and compulsion
Peter

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on May 20, 2006
An awesome poetic account, Aberjhani. Thank you and congratulations to you. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed on May 20, 2006
Excellent write; very well done, Aberjhani! Congrats on your nomination; what an honor! I am indeed in the presence of greatness! :) I bow to you and your talents!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on May 20, 2006
As a kid I remember hearing the story of the blackbird and nobody wanted to see one on their windowsil. Most graphic poem and certainly a winner of a write that is descriptive in its intensity.

Reviewed on May 20, 2006
Aberjhani,

With writes like this, that clearly captures what Savannah is, I can see why you were named "Best Poet." This is full of charm and beauty; you've done good here. Nay. Really good. Well done, and congratulations!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on May 20, 2006
I miss the wonderful mysteries that permeate the cobblestones when I'd finish the last edition at 111 West Bay Street and leave the Savannah Morning News and Evening Press. I miss the vacant street of Taylor as my radar went into high gear as I dove from my car to make it to the safety of the old hidtoric row house in the wee hours before morn. I miss the shadows in the trees and the smells of ancient aromatic petulli still caught up in the spanish moss and I miss the mysteries you've painted here because...I felt the feathers come close to me many a time when my stomach grew tight and I prayed for the safety of my townhome. I always felt protected and fortunate as are most Savannahians who live in the historic district. You gave me the mystery that I miss and you supplied the tight stomach of yesterday and the brush with death that was always protected for the select few. Awesome is a pale word for how your verse makes me feel at this moment.
Thank you from a fellow Savannahian.
Susan

Reviewed by totally anonymous (Reader)
Reviewed on May 20, 2006
brilliant imagery wow


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