Very cool write Linda! I've written some poems
about him at least one hmmmm...remember I told
you to listen to that sound swhoooooossssshhhh
that's information going over the top of my head.
lol Anyways it was a sad day when James Dean died.
Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on March 7, 2005
James Dean's death affected me deeply as it did most teens of the 50s. I thought he was the coolest of the cool, and I still have a
fan shot somewhere amongst my belongings.
The comparison of his reckless, hurried attitude towards life...with the easy-going Jimmy Dean of country western fame is really a perfect contrast.
You are a talented lady, Ms Gayton.
I applaud the way you describe the boomerang hesitation of the lover.....he sounds like a trip! lol sorry,
This is very very good!~
APPLAUSE Linda.......Applause!
pssst
let the air out of his tires
oh I loved that line
its too late to die young!
got me laughing
life does that to us, no?
pax A
Whoah Linda, another 'hit' here.
How do you do it? I read these words with something approaching envy. It builds to such a climax and then you drop in those words '...oh go on then' and POW! Great stuff!
Chanti
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on March 4, 2005
Route 66, I guess is a motorway.. Slooow down reeelax. Great message.
Women to seem to possess perception, that we totally lack..
Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on March 3, 2005
Well if they are destined to live in the fast lane the safety of your arms is sad. A poignant write here and so often repeated on the highways. But perhaps Barbara had a good answer too.
If he had a dream like and it was me telling him, I would have said "well go on then but, don't have the police come back here telling you had died wrapped around a stupid tree somewhere, cause I told you not to go, but you insisted. Bye bye." May the Lord be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love, peace, & (((HUGS))) ... Barbie
Perhaps "..Quiet Storm" will help rekindle old flames buried and long forgotten or express the love so deeply locked inside of your soul longing to be released.
Regardless of where you may be found in love this beautiful masterpiece can be
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about him at least one hmmmm...remember I told
you to listen to that sound swhoooooossssshhhh
that's information going over the top of my head.
lol Anyways it was a sad day when James Dean died.
fan shot somewhere amongst my belongings.
The comparison of his reckless, hurried attitude towards life...with the easy-going Jimmy Dean of country western fame is really a perfect contrast.
You are a talented lady, Ms Gayton.
Descripted with flair and poetic ambience ... stunning work!!
Best always,
Robert
This is very very good!~
APPLAUSE Linda.......Applause!
pssst
let the air out of his tires
oh I loved that line
its too late to die young!
got me laughing
life does that to us, no?
pax A
Thanks for sharing!
Love Tinka
How do you do it? I read these words with something approaching envy. It builds to such a climax and then you drop in those words '...oh go on then' and POW! Great stuff!
Chanti
Women to seem to possess perception, that we totally lack..
"If I have to...Then I may as well be."