earlier today my daughter took a header down an entire escalator chasing a balloon a potentially deadly trip in a second rate department store and when the screams and concerned crowds were stilled she wailed full of life wondering where her balloon went
two days ago at my second rate job i performed an action i'd done hundreds of times a day for over four years and managed to earn myself eighteen stitches across my already uncomely cheek and when the bleeding stopped and the stitches were in i drove back to work irritated wondering where my knife went
at first i was worried that she inherited from me the grace of a mule with blinders on and that she might be doomed to a string of stupid mistakes
all she really cared about was getting that damn balloon and some bumps and abrasions proved no deterrent while my concern was to get back to work get my knife back and finish the day off with my brother
in this i found some relief
in that the single mindedness of the father had been visited upon the daughter
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Reviews of "pain don't hurt (another one for elisabelle)"
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on May 12, 2005
Sounds as though you are both very focused. That should come in handy later on in life. Cute poem.
Whatever she wants-that little girl is going to get! Persistance may be the one trait necessary for survival and success. She is so beautiful! She looks like her daddy-so no more comments about "uncomely cheeks"...
Contraband Marriage, traveling along the hemline of loving after incarceration, is a love story written in lyric and free form, set in reality with a different ever after.
A most precious picture--and adorable write. I'm glad she (or you) weren't seriously hurt. :)
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)