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The Judas
by Sage Sweetwater → (All Poetry by Sage Sweetwater)
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Capturing wild mustangs


Poem Artwork

The Judas


 

From the minute
he is let out
of the stock
trailer gate


photographers
click pictures of him
quickly before
they lose sight
of him.


Writers groom
old-day words,
sepia-toned
and
copper-colored
words


that won't need
edited
when they
make it
that far,


they are at
the top
of intelligent
mustang clan
symbols.


The dust
polished off
of mustang speak
with red
bandannas,


western words
fit for a
western happening;
"squaw-hold," "15-hands,"
"dude string" ...
where the pavement
ends and the West
begins!


He is the Judas.
So named because
he will betray the
wild herd,
leading them to a
hiding place
near the funnel
and wall of
burlap netting,


a trap to capture
the wilds
hanging from
gaping rimrock.


You can't look
at the Judas
as a traitor.


He is a friend to
the mustangs,


helping them on
to better pastures,


where they will be
adopted by those
who will give
them a simpler
life,


taking them
out of the
harshness of
the desert.


The Judas was
a wild himself
at one time.


That's why he can
do his job
so well.


He knows the
terrain


and all the
tricks of survival.


His wild heritage
and the
danger of
losing the bloodline


self-spurs the
Judas to outrun
a wildfire in
Colorado.


Saves his wild breed
by stamping out
the Judas Code,


letting out a
series of whinnies.
..__(Hoof it)_
_..__(Fire!)
..__..(Outlaw Red).


The roan mare
he went back
for, when his
sweaty muzzle
caressed her
muzzle,


she opened her
eyes glazed over
by fire ash,


her thinking she
surely must have
died,


and went
through the
burlap gates


with bronze sculptures
of the Judas
glued down
on the gateposts,


HERO OF THE WILDS.

 

Copyright 2005 Sage Sweetwater, firebrand lesbian novelist



 
 


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 Reviews of "The Judas"
Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
Reviewed on November 20, 2005
Excellent Work!

Reviewed on November 14, 2005
I love the way you write, Sage. Simple. Elegant. So beautifully captured. And yet, there is a wild spirit yearning to be free...PERFECTION!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on November 13, 2005
i felt as thought i was galloping in the breezes in the poem ...

Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
Reviewed on November 12, 2005
Sage, Hero of the Wilds! Beautiful! This is such a wonderful tribute to the Wild Mustangs and the intelligence of animals. I wish so much I had some land. I've always wanted to adopt these wild mustangs (and burros too). They've always had adoptions in NV. Showing pictures of the dehydrated ones all at a troph of Gatorade. It was such a relief to see those skinny and dying Beautiful Creatures being saved. Thank you so much for this wonderful poem and tribute. I wish I was monetarily rich for to get me lots of land to give them a safe home and other critters as well I'd be a total peace. (or if my rich aunt and uncle weren't so chincy and selfish & give me some money for land!!lol)
Thanks so much again my Beautiful Caring friend.
Tracey xoox(c :)

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on November 12, 2005
Personally I like Jeeps, as Mustangs are not well built...oh, er, uh, you are speaking of a real horse aren't you...sorry! My other half has a Tenn Walking horse so horses run in her line...I like em' but from a life of fear regarding same, I keep them at a safe distance...peace thru the written word, Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on November 12, 2005
Enjoyed the story telling...3 yrs ago one early spring morning I had the rare opportunity to see a herd just north of the Red Rock, CA area...stunning can only describe the feeling of seeing them free like that, and i met one of the adopted babies last summer up in Reno and he was full of love...a nuzzler for sure.


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