She's eyes for you, I know,
rumors you've danced topless
for her,
standing outside our bedroom
window in these backwoods,
peering at her tongue dragging
across my bush of fire, staring
out the window at you, motioning
with her finger coated with me
she'll be coming for you later.
Jolene, Jolene, take her
just because you can.
She's eyes for you, I know,
rumors you've licked the window
glass for her, though she's a
peace-loving Quaker woman
making no mention,
standing outside our bedroom
window in these backwoods,
peering at her putting it to me
as she screws you.
Jolene, Jolene, take her
just because you can.
She's eyes for you, I know.
She's walking out the door
coming for you, meeting
you in your SUV
parked down the dirt road
in these backwoods.
Jolene, Jolene, take her
just because you can
I smell you and your moonshine
whiskey on her breath when she
comes home satisfied until you
knock on our bedroom window.
Jolene, Jolene come inside and
take her this way.
I've eyes for her, she knows,
rumors I've danced topless
for her,
standing outside our bedroom
window in these backwoods,
peering at her tongue dragging
across your bush of fire,
staring out the window at me,
motioning with her finger coated
with you, she'll be coming for me
later.
You musta had Dolly Parton in mind when you penned this beauty! Jolene so happens to be one of my very favorite country music songs (but not Like Coal Miner's Daughterrrrr....*grins*)! Very well done; enjoyed!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
You're a woman after my own heart, penning this passionate delight...and I love that song. Thank you--double the pleasure, double the fun!! :)
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Anne Williams (Reader)
Reviewed on March 8, 2006
an intriguing passion play. i followed you one way and then your words flipped. ifelt confused like i didn't know who had who or who was stealing who but i like it that way...3 way dances are never quite clear.
Love the song, and this is a great poem to go with it.
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on March 8, 2006
Haha!!! Gotta love it, Sage, one of my ALL TIME favorites from Dolly (whadda gal!) Parton all these years. I have inclided Jolene in a novel I am about half through with, that name and Bobbie Gentry's "Fancy" are my two favorite names. As I am wont to say, so I'll say it again, gotta love it!
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You musta had Dolly Parton in mind when you penned this beauty! Jolene so happens to be one of my very favorite country music songs (but not Like Coal Miner's Daughterrrrr....*grins*)! Very well done; enjoyed!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
You're a woman after my own heart, penning this passionate delight...and I love that song. Thank you--double the pleasure, double the fun!! :)
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
You two have a good thing going here.
Susan
Ring around the circle, don't you know that it feels so fine "....
You light up the Den tonite Sage with another of your trademark, firebrand scorchers
This is a genuine take on the Observer and the Observed....your labours are breathtakingly original, dashing and daring, and you always cock a snoot at convention !
I love that Sister Sage...:)
Flamelicking graphic !
Peter