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Driving down a dark, desert highway, with the wind blowing my dark hair,
pastels, charcoal, and sketchpads to spare.
Checking into Hotel California, she has pink champagne on ice, the conscierge gives me some message advice.
"She left a message for you at the desk. I memorized it from her sweet lips."
I tipped the conscierge a C-note and took two champagne sips, tossed the bubbles down.
Closed the lavender curtains, set up my easel in the shadow, mirrors on the ceiling put my pastels aglow,
Charcoal turned into flame, the words came in encaustic sparks, "She's married." the conscierge's message resonated.
Inspiration flames licked down upon me, the mirrors blazing in hot oranges and reds, I sketched the real deal, the merging of two Queen-size beds.
I left one glass of champagne, the words came in eternal choice, the conscierge's voice, the message resonated, "You can check out anytime you like, but you can never leave."
Copyright 2006 Sage Sweetwater, firebrand lesbian novelist, brainchild of Sage Sweetwater Creative Properties, flagship of Stone Creek Woman
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Regis
Excellent words from a soul woman.
Susan
You are so clever! Well done! And wonderfully creative! Such a good tune for you to tune! You're one in a zillion!
Love & Inspiration Suzie xox :-)
You paint a new and erotic slant on this Eagle's classic as only you Salubrious Sage could do !
The tone of this is erotic electricity !
You tap into the dynamics of the senses
Press forever onward, Sage
The monitor ain't the only thing that just melted into a puddle of delighted bliss.......damn!!!!!!!!!! whatta write! Excellence!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
This is a scintillating, erotic write; very well done! BRAVA! LOVE the picture!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D