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Play Me
by Sage Sweetwater → (All Poetry by Sage Sweetwater)
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*She was morning
And I was night time
I one day woke up
To find her lying
Beside my bed
I softly said
"Come take me."
*Neil Diamond~~


renewing the moments
of peace,

Diamond knew we
were looking for
it,

a waterfall so
intense, play me,

standing together
midstream,

it is here standing
that I have heard
the most evocative
sounds,

beads on water
lilies, petals wide

we shower as
ancient Sumeria,
supreme expression
of our creativity,

the sexual ethos
inspires erotic text,
"the opening lotus bud
perfumed like the lily
that has newly burst."

a religious-erotic
discourse, the
Sumerian tableaux,
far more important
than carnal pleasure,

standing beneath our
waterfall, we are
refined, practised,
and developed to a
level of sophistication
that we become a
basis for philosophical
and religious thought,
play me...

*You are the sun
I am the moon
You are the words
I am the tune
Play me.
*Neil Diamond~~


Copyright 2006 Sage Sweetwater, firebrand lesbian novelist




 


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 Reviews of "Play Me"
Reviewed on July 22, 2008
Sage this is one of your more gentle and romantic writes. It's exquisite in everyway.

Reviewed by Thomas Garrett
Reviewed on July 22, 2006
I keep saying it -- you do wonders with imagery, this time turning Neil Diamond's song into a wonderful visual exprience with your own vision. And what a vision it is.

Sonny G

Reviewed by Chrissy McVay
Reviewed on July 16, 2006
Love Neil Diamond. Great poetry.

Reviewed by Barbara Terry
Reviewed on July 16, 2006
You are so enticing, sis. These are very vivid romantic sexual images, Sage. Your mind is as active as your sexual appetite. I liked reading this.

May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie

"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be."

Reviewed on July 15, 2006
Wonderful imageries! I lke this!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on July 15, 2006
You lean into the wind with this one and the wind could be called Sweetwater.


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