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Country Roads
by Sage Sweetwater → (All Poetry by Sage Sweetwater)
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they told her if she was
going to live in Kansas
and had a dog, she'd
have to register it under
the name of Toto,
"you know where you
can go to!" she sped
off to Colorado,

when the country barn
saw her coming, the
barnwood aged a little
more just for her outlaw
liking, the old-day bricks
in the silo tightened and
smiled, showing not a flaw
when she walked past,

she bought a set of Amish
schoolbooks and a wire-mesh
corn popper, fed fried green
tomatoes to the grasshopper,

met a pretty woman mid-way
on a covered bridge who was
leading a team of horses,
compared details about their
divorces, she climbed on the
buggy, they went on down the
country roads, the congregation
at the wooden bridge, baptizing
in white robes wading out into
the waist-deep water,

her and buggy woman shared
a fried egg sandwich wrapped
in wax paper from a brown paper
bag and a bottle of whiskey not so
discreetly tucked under the buggy
seat minus the upholstery tag,
broke the seal-with-a-kiss,
sharing an afternoon of passion,
spellbound by the clear-washed
sky and the feel of a fuzzy-worn
cattail,

now, the spaded soil of their
fall-tilled country garden lies
with an empty canvass ripe with
spring possibility, both eager to
play the role of paintbrush,

shaving the kindling into curled
strips for a quick-start fire, the
metaphor spiked with the whiskey
in the Mason jar, looking out of the
oak bedroom door to the country roads...


Copyright 2006 Sage Sweetwater, firebrand lesbian novelist
 

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 Reviews of "Country Roads"
Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on September 6, 2006
You have painted a total picture here, gotta love that bridge, though a covered one is pretty nice too...ed

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on September 5, 2006
Felt like I was there... so very visual and cinematic, Sage, and so deft are your character portraits. A very stirring and sensual write... like art of the highest forms. I feel like I've had a good stiff drink and yet been soothed by watching the slow tumbling and falling of the olive through the tall glass at the same time! :)) WTG, Sage... I love this one. TY Kate xx

Reviewed by Suzie Palmer
Reviewed on September 4, 2006
Your writes are such an adventure Sage!
So unique; unlike anything going round the global town, I'm sure!!
I always learn new something from you!
Love, Suzie :-D

Reviewed by Thomas Garrett
Reviewed on September 4, 2006
For a bit, I thought you were a woman out of your time, Sage. But now I see you're a timeless woman.

Sonny G

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on September 4, 2006
your story telling skills and message excell in this poem, Sage ...

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on September 4, 2006
Pioneer spirit for a pioneer woman's poetry. You are just awesome Sage and in all your pens there are lessons to learn. Thank you!
Susan

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 4, 2006
Sage this is a favorite, you put heart and soul in this one and came up a winner! You are a born story teller!

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on September 4, 2006
Amazing images, Sage, this one comes alive on the page right down to the clip-clop of the horse's hooves, that I was certain I could hear, on the wooden slats of the bridge. You wrote this one in Technicolor, Lady. Excellent pen.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on September 4, 2006
sage, i've always been a fan, but this is spectacular. i want to save it and read it again and again

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 4, 2006
Spectacular! Spell-binding story.

Just had an exchange with Tinka trying to describe my love for John Denver's classic when I caught your title.

That picture makes me long for a big engine ride and good tires to wind out some testosterone without a speed limit.

Ron

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on September 4, 2006
You just never know what to expect in the country.......its not as quiet as they lead you to believe ;-)


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