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Take That Stripe Off That Blanket
by Sage Sweetwater → (All Poetry by Sage Sweetwater)
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take that stripe
off that blanket,

no, I won't do
it...she's earned
her stripes,

take that stripe
off that blanket,

no, I won't do
it...she's colorful,

take that stripe
off that blanket,

no, I won't do
it...she rides
firebrand
saddle-stitch
racing the wind,

take that stripe
off that blanket,

no, I won't do
it...she's a midwife,
delivered that baby
wrapped up in that
stripe,

take that stripe
off that blanket,

no, I won't do
it...she gave that
stripe to warm
a homeless woman
freezing in a cardboard
box,

take that stripe
off that blanket,

no, I won't do
it...she gave that
stripe to the Salvation
Army bell ringer to
give to the needy,

take that stripe
off that blanket,

no, I won't do
it...she wrapped
the base of the
church christmas tree
with that stripe,
and sang with the
Christians, The Little
Drummer Boy...yes,
that firebrand pagan did...


Copyright 2006 Sage Sweetwater, firebrand lesbian novelist




 

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 Reviews of "Take That Stripe Off That Blanket"
Reviewed on November 19, 2006
YOU are totally amazing Sage!
I wouldn't do it either!!!
YOu got my attention!
AGain! As usual!
You amaze me!
You're writing style, I wish I had that TAlent
I only wishhhhhh...
I will enjoy YOU!
WArmly, Sheee

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on November 19, 2006
Your well of inspiration is indeed most proficient, Sage; we, your readers are fortunate indeed. Thank you for sharing your gifts. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on November 18, 2006
i agree don't do it!!!
really really nice
like Jude said it's magical!!

Reviewed by Chrissy McVay
Reviewed on November 16, 2006
Love this!

Chrissy

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on November 15, 2006
that stripe has a magic of its own that cannot be disposed or uncrowned ...it is a symbol of goodness that permeates all of life ...

Reviewed by Brett Moore
Reviewed on November 15, 2006
I love the rebellion in this. It's kind of a poetic flipping of the bird. Great offering.

Brett

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on November 15, 2006
Marvelous...

You have so many different styles of writing, it is difficult to pick a favorite. (But then, who said I had to. ROFL)



Elizabeth

Reviewed by Frances Lynn
Reviewed on November 15, 2006
Good! Ten stripes out of ten.


Reviewed by Donna Quesinberry
Reviewed on November 14, 2006
Sage,

Wise writ and unique.

Spasiba,

~D.

Reviewed by Thomas Garrett
Reviewed on November 14, 2006
Sage, you firebrand pagan you. You're a surprising writer because you keep surprising us with such wonderful words. Thanks.

Sonny G

Reviewed by Jake George (Reader)
Reviewed on November 14, 2006
Sage my dear that whas well spoken. Gave me goose bumps on me bumples...

Love ya little Sis. Keep knocking them dead...

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on November 14, 2006
Significant and admirable defiance, making the humble and lowly, faceless grey surge blanket into a coat of many colours and a mantle fit for a queen. A badge of high honour instead of a cloak of chagrin. Neat, Sage, and a sustained working of a memorable motif. I salute you... and The Firebrand smokin a trail through the wool... TY K xx

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on November 14, 2006
This reminded me of hospital blankets ..aswell as boardingschool blankets...they all had two stripes...made it easier to made the bed perfect!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on November 14, 2006
Excellent poem Sage! Very interesting theme, as you do so well! Love this song;-)...ET

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on November 14, 2006
Enjoyed,well done


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