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Tubular Bells
by Sage Sweetwater → (All Poetry by Sage Sweetwater)
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help me, help me
do it better, get it to
go to my *eponymous strait,
hearkening to the lament of
penetration, astride the pinnacle
of excellence, all of our understanding
is based deeper, help me, help me do it
deeper,

ultrahot core, taking
measurements of joint
effort, figure the distance
from Earth To Sun, from Capricorn
to Sagittarius, help me, help me
do it better,

when push comes
to shove, erotic canter,
I hear tubular bells, fifty
light years away in the night
sky, a star like our sun, you're
doing a penetrating dance, kneeling
away from Earth and then back again,
help me, help me do it fittingly tubular,

Oh my Luna!
it's taken a turn,
bending toward the
familiar, that penetration
be a part of continuum, in
this artist's conception, help
me, help me paint orgasmic strokes
of understanding,

back and forth
something massive
is orbiting, tugging pink
this way and that, help me,
help me in timing, how long
does it take to complete an orbit,

planetary sapphos
playing gravitational
penetration, do you know
how hot you look between
my legs playing tubular bells
on the scorching sheets of the
planet's heat-swollen crevice,

I feel the dip
that repeats, and
repeats exactly, the
penetration you wear
so well, delivering a generous
splash, you generate anticipation,
help me, help me position the shadows,
the next dip captures the light,

penetration, help me,
help me work deeper
on this concept, kneeling
away from Earth and then
back again, help me do it
fittingly tubular, hearkening to
the lament of penetration, astride
the pinnacle of excellence...


Copyright 2006 Sage Sweetwater, firebrand lesbian novelist

*eponymous [An eponym is the name of a person, whether real or fictitious, who has (or is thought to have) given rise to the name of  a particular place, tribe, discovery, or other item. An eponymous person is the person referred to by the eponym. In contemporary English, the term eponymous is often used to mean self-titled. The word eponym is often used for the thing titled particular place, tribe, discovery, or other item. The word eponym is often used for the thing titled]

Ancient Whispers: Gaia Returns
was the subject of discussion
in my Poetry Life & Times
interview in the February 2006
issue with editor Sara Russell
http://www.authorsden.com/visit/viewpoetry.asp?id=151862




    

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 Reviews of "Tubular Bells"
Reviewed by Ulrike Gerbig
Reviewed on June 11, 2007
you are a great talent!

thanks for sharing!

ulrike

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on December 2, 2006
Ooooooooooooooh yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeah.... Love this one, Sage. Certainly does it for me. Surging deeper and higher on that pinnacle of success via excellence certainly creates appetites. And appetites that can only be satsified by more of the same thing! So higher and higher we are forced to go... whilst yet plunging the depths. Mike Oldfield's music, too, speaks to me of that nascent awareness of personal potential, yearning to be fulfilled. One of my personal favs of yours. TY K xx

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on November 30, 2006
A masterpiece!

as always..you have great talent Sage!


Vesna:)

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on November 30, 2006
a lip-pulsing, musical pentration, piercing the statosphere of ogasmic strokes ...

you sure can stimulate my mind, Sage ...

Reviewed by Malcolm Watts (Reader)
Reviewed on November 30, 2006
Hot, hot, hot...cosmic orgasms sought

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on November 30, 2006
You are the eponym of "Tubular Bells" in this write! Outstanding penetrations of the chimes in your chum! Smiles!
Got me going this morning!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy

Reviewed by Blue Sleighty
Reviewed on November 30, 2006
Await the Vernal Equinox

Bringing you ALL of its bounty

And a new erection

IN Custer county

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on November 30, 2006
Stunningly erotic and as the poem suggests thought the subject may be out of this world or the fantasy the results come crashing home at the end.Beautiful work here Sage.

Fee


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