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DeSoto Jesus on Edsel Road
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DeSoto Jesus on Edsel Road

chrysler christ
founded upon corporation,
oh aren't they all;

hernando de soto jesus
in competition with his arch-rivals
general motors and studebaker;

rumors circulated desoto
was going to be discontinued,
fueled by reduction, termination
of the brand; lost its series designation
entirely, reminiscent of packard's final line-lineup,
the final desoto of questionable design merit

hood ornament desoto jesus
dies on the crossroads between
heaven and earth, corporate mistakes,
christ chrysler warehouses with several
million dollars of accessory parts to glamorize
religion rolling
The Wheel of Life

edsel synonymous
with failure, concluded
that lincoln was not competing
with cadillac but with oldsmobile;
citation, corsair, pacer and ranger,
disciples of pushbutton teletouch motor
jesus, transmission of the gods, historians
with theories; failure to understand consumers,
wrong car at the wrong time, a lemon, marketing
disaster of desoto jesus on edsel road, proselytizing,
no, that's advertising campaign through a highly blurred lens,
potential buyers leaving dealership lots

Copyright Ms. Sage Sweetwater, firebrand lesbian novelist


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 Reviews of "DeSoto Jesus on Edsel Road"
Reviewed by Chip Bergeron
Reviewed on August 31, 2011
I guess auto advertising can be likened to proselytizing, a kind of infernal evanglism that trades a bit of immediate gratification for empty pockets. I do like your analotgies.

Chip Bergeron

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on August 15, 2011
Oh yes, you got me interested herein, all those great cars of the past & memories of same and others...great write, Sage, hope you are keeping well...ed

Reviewed by Michelle Mead
Reviewed on August 14, 2011
You, madam, are so damn cool. So is this poem. I loveeeeeee all the old car mentions, love classic cars, and the way you combine the depth of meaning in this with the strong imagery, magic.

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on August 14, 2011
SAGE, My father had an Edsel--1959--

Always,
Deborah

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on August 14, 2011
i do enjoy your continuing unique perspective as well as novel imagery to portray your perspective ... a true poetic mixology of religious dogma, historic and modern social saga, theosophical spell work, as well as sexual innuendo and direct reference, reveal a special sense of being...

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on August 14, 2011
The first car I drove over 100 mph was an Edsel. My Studebaker never made it past 50...so sad.

Cheers,
Dan


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