Flow like a River (poem) by Joy Leftow on AuthorsDen

Flow like a River
by Joy Leftow → (All Poetry by Joy Leftow)
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New love which flows is always exciting, satisfying and inspiring.
my love for you flows like a river intermingling energies from our bodies and minds we become a poem about flow like a river separate yet together, we glide through the red earthern river watching golden sun reflect off deep violet and blue running water we flow we move as one, with the grace of a nod or a word move safely from one activity to the next parts of the same clock; two hands tick, you play the big hand; I am the little we switch gears so I am big and you are little How did we do that in the wink of a eye Refreshing like a cool breeze at sunset on a warm day comfortable like a hot blast from a furnace when we return to a warm inn at sunset after a rigid freezing day outdoors we return to reality; I am me and you are you we are not separate pieces of reality nor are we separate pieces of each other though each coming together makes reality less clear

Reviewed by Swonnati Aurora (Reader)

Reviewed on June 23, 2021

Wow! What a lovely imagery.

>>>>we glide through the red earthern river
watching golden sun reflect off deep violet and blue running water we flow>>>>

A vivid impression of natural beauty. It is a soothing poem.

Reviewed by Lois Christensen

Reviewed on July 6, 2008

Easily read work, great message to it. Have found it a joy to read.

Reviewed by Ken Chartrand

Reviewed on June 16, 2008

Hello Joy, I read your poem,"Flow like a River". I found it so full of great imagery one could actually see the river you speak of. Well done. Please feel free to visit my site here in the "Den"

Reviewed by Rafika Anderson (Reader)

Reviewed on January 27, 2008

Ah yes, don't you love that coming together into oneness aspect of a relationship? You describe it so well. I particularly enjoyed the two hands of the clock analogy of this open, easy flowing piece. Well done.