I love poems like the one you wrote.
They really make you think.
I know growing up I was spoiled rotten.
So much I think that I sometimes stink.
Not the stink that makes me sweat and smell.
But the selfish stink that can send us straight to
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Made in the U.S.A. on Dec 10th,2008
Have a GREAT NEW YEAR!
John Michael Domino
Cute. I think it takes a big person to admit their selfish ways and to attack their own ego with the sword of truth. I've known many selfish people who could be agents of peace in their neighborhoods if they only had in their possession the sword and read it.
Great poem, succinct and mature.
Cheers J'nia
Timeless wisdom and advice on the art of living for today’s young and old: The art of thinking, the art of loving, the art of working, the art of leadership, the art of growing old.
A new translation by Sergio E. Serrano of this inspirationa
Great poem, succinct and mature.
Cheers J'nia