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A water drop
by Georg E Mateos → (All Poetry by Georg E Mateos)
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Suddenly it hits you in the face anouncing a downpour, a wet herald from the skies telling the seeds to be ready to give man his bread.


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A water drop decided to quit
after getting tired of been
pushed, shake and blown
by mighty winds in the midle
of a never ending storm;
from water into ice into
sparkling little diamonds
that make the snow,
and then again,
melting into tiny pearls
to be part of the fog,
that make the lights
to fade away
by obscuring the sun,

the little drop, after quitting,
jumped from the cloud and went
traveling on the shoulders of the wind
without looking down;
Freedom!!!...Freedom!!!
freedom is waiting down below,
in the thirsty earth
of a thirsty world,
waitng for the drop to give life
to a flower or a grain of corn;

nobody followed after
the solitary drop,
all being so busy riding
the fury of the storm,
that they didn't noticed
that the little drops its fall
wasn't on fertile waiting ground...
but on a rock.
 

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 Reviews of "A water drop"
Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Reviewed on June 13, 2008
A little water drop, on a rock. So touching to me. I like to see the raindrops on my door when it first starts to rain. But on a rock, I never noticed. Good words and free flowing poetry.

Reviewed by Raymond Morrow
Reviewed on February 5, 2008
Great poem. that little drop could share the rock with a lot of us.

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on October 18, 2007
Beautiful, very-very talented!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on March 2, 2007
Enjoyed this much Georg. We do face many unexpected twists and turns my friend! Very creative...I recall having to do a short story when I was in school where I had to become a raindrop and write about my travels and destination...lots of fun!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on March 1, 2007
excellent poem, Georg ... life has unexpected turns ... no matter how well planned out or how spontaneous its freedom, where it leads is determined by the winds of destiny ...

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on March 1, 2007
gotta embrace freedom, no matter how short-lived... i'am with linda hill on this one, secretly hoping your little rain drop found its wildflower! the romance is irresistible...
well-penned, georg.
peace,
carolyn

Reviewed on March 1, 2007
Wow this is just splendid. When we write exactly the way we want and how we exactly feel then we all can relate or feel it. it is always an indeed pleasure to read your poetry especially ones with so much meaning and easy to understand. Keep writing and nevaer stop. Love Aleja Bennett.

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on March 1, 2007
'A Water Drop' falling onto nothing but a rock. How sad in compassison to where it should have fallen.Excellent poem.
God Bless, holly

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on March 1, 2007
...readying to boil into a vaporous fog, only to be evaporated into the atmosphere, swept up into the same winds of fore, reuniting with its origin of source...the everlasting cloud towards heaven's infinite thirst!
Wow...you got me going and continuing...
drop by drop...
Love it!
Love and peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on March 1, 2007
Georg,
Enjoyed the journey of the little raindrop. My hope is that it glided off the rock onto a waiting wild flower below.:) Excellent poetry.

Many blessings,
~Linda

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on March 1, 2007
Brave little wayward drop with all the best intentions I would like to imagine that on that rock was a thirsty gecko in need of just a solitary drop of water. Lady J

Reviewed by Michael Mathieu (Reader)
Reviewed on March 1, 2007
Sometimes we all fall hard,well said,Freedom is different for all of us,
God Bless,

Michael


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