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When You Hurt Someone...
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We do it everyday, sometimes conscientuosly, but we do it; it is like a little stab on the tip of a finger from a thorn...


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When you hurt Winter...
it bleeds snow.

Sure, saying goodby
with a double-edged word
huts like you won't believe,
and if you believe, even more.

When you hurt Spring...
it bleeds songs.

Of painful life's dark ages
felt deep, like a throbbing thorn,
desillusion have a few days, but,
haunting rejection has even more.

When you hurt Autumn...
it bleeds dead leaves colors.

The saddest name you ever read
is carved in a gray headstone,
saying with weather fading letters,
here lies someone you loved.

When you hurt Summer...
it bleeds golden rays of sun.

If you hurt someone,
regret for what you done
will haunt day and night,
until you, bleed snow.




 

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 Reviews of "When You Hurt Someone..."
Reviewed on April 6, 2007
much thought and creativity in this verse George

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on April 4, 2007
Very beautiful and interesting thoughts
But yes when you hurt someone you love or care for
But I have notice that some people
don't see the wrong in what they
Do or who they hurt and don't
Give it a second thought!!
Excellent poetic view of thoughts
Outstanding imagery and flow!!
Love And Peace to You Always
Your Friend..Morning Star

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on April 4, 2007
Interessting insight Georg with a twinge of sadness intertwined within. A good write!

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on April 4, 2007
conceptually stimulating with some choice imagery ...

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on April 4, 2007
Too Many **People Think They Can Still Say one Thing Then Do Another Thing,i.e.You Can Never Take Back Anything... When I Write I Say What I Mean I Mean What I Write--I Pull No Punches...

Simply It's Better For It As **People Above-2 Faced...Love Is Better Lost Than Lived In Betrayal,i.e. I'd Rather Do Live Alone...

Unique Write Different But Tells Think Before You Speak Those Words You Can Never Take Back After All Is Said An Done- I Do Not Believe In Forgiveness...

Thank You Your Comments...

TRASK

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on April 4, 2007
creative using the seasons in your descriptors

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on April 4, 2007
The shame I've seen even recently is that some people don't see the wrong in what they do that hurts. Good thoughts today. Lady J

Reviewed on April 4, 2007
Georg,

Ohhhhhhhhhh...this one is amazingly penned; incredible imagery; deep thought provoking message; my new favorite of yours. EXCELLENT!

(((HUGS)))) and love, Karla. *applause*

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on April 4, 2007
Most beautiful offering!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on April 4, 2007
Absolutely beautiful. Linda said it all. <Mikii>

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on April 4, 2007
Georg,
Brilliantly done! You have amazing talent!

Many blessings,
~Linda

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on April 4, 2007
Powerfully penned, Georg, and I really like how you tied this to the four seasons.


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