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Heart Work (haiku)
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With love, the heart go diastole pumping blood with the energy of a hysterical woodpecker, then...chagrin d'amour has the heart going systole, like a baloon's last exhalation of breath...

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Diastole goes Love
then, we broke up and it is
Systole caused by pain.






 

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 Reviews of "Heart Work (haiku)"
Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on April 14, 2007
This a beautifully written haiku
Breaking up is very emotional and painful
Creative choice of words which
provide with nice imagery!!
Excellent message!!
Love And Peace To You Always
Your Friend...Morning star
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on April 14, 2007
This one is so sad. Breaking up IS hard to do, isn't it?

Be safe,
Karen
Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on April 14, 2007
Oh Georg excellent Ku and message....
Peace,
josie
Reviewed by CJ Heck
Reviewed on April 14, 2007
George, this is excellent -- and words we can all relate to. very well done, my friend.
Love,
CJ
Reviewed by HB Clayton
Reviewed on April 14, 2007
The heart is probably the strongest yet most fragile organ of the body. It also has the capacity to create beautiful Haiku. HB
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on April 14, 2007
Very well written reality for many!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on April 14, 2007
Love is pain, what can you do...Ed
Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on April 14, 2007
it does do that, this was creative
Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on April 14, 2007
A creative write my friend, a different style for you...but that is one of the wonderful things about writing...enjoyed this much.
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Reviewed by Gloria Buono
Reviewed on April 14, 2007
Very creative and delightful. So much for blood pressure. Thank Ku for sharing. My best, Gloria
Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on April 14, 2007
Love them too much or too littel
what can I tell you
Enjoyed your Ku
Peace Be with You

William
Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on April 14, 2007
I think we've all been there and experienced this condition Georg. Sadly some more than others. You express it quite uniquely. I love the image of the hysterical woodpecker in your opening summary. Cracked me up! Blessings to you Poet ...

Light and Wisdom ...
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on April 14, 2007
Chagrin d'amour has sadly broken many a heart.
Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on April 14, 2007
It would take a sphygmomonometer to record it as such, but Georg, you did it with the heart itself!
Very intuitive in a sad way...
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on April 14, 2007
Georg,
Love is not always finding someone who you deserve , but finding someone who deserves YOU. With your kindness I'm sure that will happen. Excellent haiku!

Many blessing,
~Linda
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on April 14, 2007
Well done, you've got to the heart of love, then the pain of the split after you've been bled dry...
Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on April 14, 2007
The highs and lows of love that can effect our blood pressure. Good one Georg.
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Reviewed on April 14, 2007
Georg,

PERFECT capture of love--and loss. Well done!!

(((HUGS))) and love :), Karla.
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