UNLOVED (poem) by Georg E Mateos on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 20, 2007

Thank goodness for those spankings. I'd be such a brat without them!

Chrissy

Reviewed on May 15, 2007

I can relate to that dagger, most of the time it was dangling above my head!!
For me writing about the insanity of the one who popped me out, has been most liberating, and it helps others to identify, place into perspective, and move on.
Write on Georg!
Hugs
Ch'erie

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on May 15, 2007

seems you nailed this one George, quite a few own that dagger

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 14, 2007

Georg having had one of the worlds best moms, it grieves me
when I hear of those who had such sad experiences with their mother's. I know a few bad ones and it is tragic for the children. I'm sorry you have this remembrance. Good you could wtite about it, hope that it helps.

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on May 14, 2007

A sad write, one that tugs at the heart! Well written, expressed very well...hard topic to write about!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)

Reviewed on May 14, 2007

My own mother loved me the only way she knew how. Sadness is it wasnt the love I needed or the kind I could feel. Yet she still bares the title. Lady J

Reviewed by HB Clayton

Reviewed on May 14, 2007

Sad, well written, and evidence that a mother's failure doesn't reflect in her son's actions. Difficult, Very Difficult. - HB

Reviewed by Southern Comfort

Reviewed on May 14, 2007

My Poor Baby! This write slapped my face and made me cry! I could so relate to it! Sending you a BIG HUG! SC

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on May 14, 2007

Extremely sad, Georg.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on May 13, 2007

sometimes a mother can be a child's worst betrayer ...

a gripping and piecing poem ...

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on May 13, 2007

A very heartfelt, sincere write Georg. You remind many that not all parents are worthy. Good write.

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Art Hernandez

Reviewed on May 13, 2007

Kind of hard to separate love and pain at times Georg....even when it comes from Mother....it still hurts either way whether through pain or love....

nice work.....Art Sun...

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on May 13, 2007

Heartfelt offering Georg...sharp as a blade!!

Well done!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on May 13, 2007

Nice, talented, beautiful poem!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen

Reviewed on May 13, 2007

This is a needed reminder that not all have been blessed with a mother's true love. Well written poem on a difficult subject, Georg.

love,
Susan

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Reviewed on May 13, 2007

((( Georg )))
A stark reality for so many children. I fight for them every day. Thank you for giving us a glimpse into your world, my friend. May time ease your pain and may God be with you. Hugggggs

Many blessings,
~Linda

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on May 13, 2007

An awesome write Georg
Peace Be With You

William

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on May 13, 2007

Georg,

(((HUGS))) love and prayers...not all mothers should be mothers. I'm sorry you went through this...this write hurts.

~Karla. :(