You don't love me (haiku) (poem) by Georg E Mateos on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on August 24, 2007

Perfect haiku!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on August 24, 2007

Love and roses...

The comparisons could go on forever whether one is enveloped within love or cast out through rejection, it is the heart and soul that lives...

nice Georg...

Art Sun...

Reviewed by Kathryn Collins (Reader)

Reviewed on August 22, 2007

Georg,

right to it.

love,
Kathy

Reviewed by twinklewrites at her desk (Reader)

Reviewed on August 22, 2007

Very powerful Haiku...and words to prick the heart, yikes...fabulous write Georg...Hugs and Love, Peggy

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on August 21, 2007

love it!
peace,
carolyn

Reviewed by HB Clayton

Reviewed on August 21, 2007

This haiku left handprints on the back of my head. Well written and impossible to miss the point. I love it - HB

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on August 21, 2007

Right to the point, Georg. Such powerful expression with a brevity of words. Thank you, mon ami. Amour et paix,

Regis

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on August 21, 2007

Ouch. Spot on perfection, Georg.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on August 21, 2007

Such a sad write you have shared with us today, we have to care for the rose and make sure it doesn't wilt and die.
newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on August 21, 2007

Oh Georg, this is so true and sadly it continues. Seems that history does repeat itself, only the faces and names change. Great write as always.....

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on August 20, 2007

A thought provoking ku my friend...all too often we linger within the indifferences of life which will cause our souls to wilt...profound indeed!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on August 20, 2007

Well once the rose is picked and given
it must be treated with TLC or it will wilted die George!
But some people do think is becaouse it
was given without love or bad intentions
Excellent ( haiku )
Love Peace and many Hugssss to you....Yolie

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on August 20, 2007

Now that's a great modern ku. Victor

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on August 20, 2007

Georg, very good Ku'

Thanks,
Dan

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on August 20, 2007

How true this is....

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)

Reviewed on August 20, 2007

The rose should have never wilted let alone died. Indifference is a place where one should never reside, but too many do sadly, God Bless my friend, Holly

Reviewed by M.Bennett Hooper (Mikii)

Reviewed on August 20, 2007

Georg I'm jealous because I can't write a haiku. Truly beautiful excellent piece. PLB&G for caring and sharing. <Mikii>

Reviewed by Southern Comfort

Reviewed on August 20, 2007

Oh Baby, I know this was jest musin, cause nobody could not love you!
You are truly a beautiful man and a woman's dream lover! HUGS! SC

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on August 20, 2007

excellent Ku Georg
Where there's no love
Nothing grows
so he withered dry
to be scattered into the four winds

Peace Brother
William

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on August 20, 2007

In love with roses...sad but true...once the rose is picked...its death is inevitable. Loss of interest...wilted.
Wonderful Poetry...
John

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on August 20, 2007

Indifference is a type of leaven that will corrupt anything that it touches dear Georg. Emotionlessness, impassiveness ... any kind of apathy that is demonstrated by the absence of emotional reaction is a witches brew that destroys like a category 5 hurricane.

Excellent thought Poet ...
Richard

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury

Reviewed on August 20, 2007

What a powerful emotion is created by these lines. Enjoyed

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on August 20, 2007

Very well put, Georg, Very short and to the point.
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER

Reviewed on August 20, 2007

George, very sweet, it fell on it's own thorn for the lack of love maybe!

Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*® Authors & Creations

Reviewed on August 20, 2007

Indifference... yes, sometimes coldness, sometimes that ultimate unresponsiveness that... kills of slow frostbite - not only Love, but so much of Life itself. But here goes a warm and affectionate {{{{{{{{{{hug}}}}}}}}} with lots of sunshine for the Rose,
Alexandra*

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on August 20, 2007

Oh how sad and yes Georg, indifference is a killer of love and closeness. Roses need sunshine and rain. Lovely poem.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on August 20, 2007

Indifference, what a truly sad word, and something that has killed many a wondrous thing, including that beautiful rose and someone's most beautiful love.