Never led anyone sad to nurse their tears alone, share the pain and it will seems less, tell words of comfort and the silence will seems lighter...
Hugging the girl after she stopped crying,
my heart bled with every and each thorn
that was piercing hers, but my own tears
couldn’t wash away her sense of abandon.
Like seeing a beautiful rose dismembering
petal by petal by unseen fingers, it alone
make me to hate those insensitive hands
that were destroying beauty from my world.
She looked up to my face with pleading eyes
like asking that eternal why? But it was none
to be answered when she was asking me,
because with another man she was in love.
I am the one that always go behind, retrieving
the broken pieces that for many hearts fall,
no to mend the pieces of foundered feelings,
but to offer to the crying one a tender word.
I am wandering on the empty streets of my life,
no broken pieces will ever fell from me as I go,
one can get broken what we never, ever had,
when there is not a queen, it will be not a drone.
The girl’s tears that fell down on that lovely face
have dried up, the cause for them almost gone,
in my arms, she looked up at me, a pleading smile,
“if I forgive him, do you think that he will come?”
I couldn’t think, I couldn’t say, because my heart
she was stabbing with those unforgiving thorns,
not seeing me but pieces of the past and future,
where our present was just not altogether born.
This Is Very Emotional Indeed. The feelings of lonley in silence & pain to console another are something I do well myself. Mending is a constant duration of our Hearts Love. Many Blessings Vickie
Powerful feelings....deeply felt insight
Most beautiful view of your thoughts Georg !!
Outstanding Piece!!
Have a happy Halloween!
Love Peace and hugssss....Morning Star
Oh Sweetheart! There are none so blind as those that can't see the beauty before them! Hopefully she will see the beautiful man that stands before her! You are a HERO and the other man is a ZERO! LOVE YOU! SC
Thorns hurt,,, but there is that man that never asks for anything in return, just Removes Thorns and fixes Eyes so Sad, where others never see, "that is a special man".
so Beautiful,,,,,,
Christine
Georg, your heart is so beautiful. Too beautiful to feel this pain. Know that you are loved by those of us here. This made me cry that she would hurt you so. Be strong my dear.
Love,
annie
Like seeing a beautiful rose dismembering
petal by petal by unseen fingers...(this line drew me into your poem)
She looked up to my face with pleading eyes
like asking that eternal why? (this one even further...)
couldn’t think, I couldn’t say, because my heart
she was stabbing with those unforgiving thorns,
not seeing me but pieces of the past and future,
where our present was just not altogether born
(and the last stanz...made me cry...)
Your compassion surpasses most, therefore you will never, ever "be alone"
Excellent Georg!
Absolutely EXCELLENT!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
Georg, You deserve better than unrequited love, look for a "real" lover, that will satisfy your desires and dreams.
Forget about those who do not understand you, or who are so selfish to see the real you.
This poem really speaks to me, thank you.
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"
Sweet Georg-
YOur compassion is beaming in every line you have written!
Such a sweet and deep intense poem!
NEVER should anyone be alone, when sadness creeps in if they are wanting company, to console is the way to a healing within!
To SHARE is the key, to take the time, as you shared out with the reader in your flow and rhyme.
Thank You for your O P E N caring heart my Sweet loving friend~!
Warm Hugs, Light, Wisdom and a filling of Inner PEACE and LOVE! Warmly, Warrior Purple Lady Sheeeoox
How about our Collab. sweetness? I be awaiting patiently for your uniqueness!
yet well composed and expressed
thanks for sharing
peace be with you Brother
William
Most beautiful view of your thoughts Georg !!
Outstanding Piece!!
Have a happy Halloween!
Love Peace and hugssss....Morning Star
Happy Halloween !!
Love Tinka
Richard
Be safe,
Karen
Walt
so Beautiful,,,,,,
Christine
Love,
annie
petal by petal by unseen fingers...(this line drew me into your poem)
She looked up to my face with pleading eyes
like asking that eternal why? (this one even further...)
couldn’t think, I couldn’t say, because my heart
she was stabbing with those unforgiving thorns,
not seeing me but pieces of the past and future,
where our present was just not altogether born
(and the last stanz...made me cry...)
Your compassion surpasses most, therefore you will never, ever "be alone"
Excellent Georg!
Absolutely EXCELLENT!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
You reached in and gave this reader's heart a squeeze...believable sadness, born from experience, your own pain, perhaps? Well written.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(
Fee
Forget about those who do not understand you, or who are so selfish to see the real you.
This poem really speaks to me, thank you.
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"
nice work Georg
enjoyed...
Art sun...
the broken pieces that for many hearts fall,
A very thankless task, indeed, but a most compassionate one, brother.
YOur compassion is beaming in every line you have written!
Such a sweet and deep intense poem!
NEVER should anyone be alone, when sadness creeps in if they are wanting company, to console is the way to a healing within!
To SHARE is the key, to take the time, as you shared out with the reader in your flow and rhyme.
Thank You for your O P E N caring heart my Sweet loving friend~!
Warm Hugs, Light, Wisdom and a filling of Inner PEACE and LOVE! Warmly, Warrior Purple Lady Sheeeoox
How about our Collab. sweetness? I be awaiting patiently for your uniqueness!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D