My contribution to the invitation by our Andre Bendavi ben YEHU for the National Poetry Month.
You all know the Colonel, he will talk to you like a father that can't go away yet, because he is bound here by the plight of his children.
The Southern Belle, from Santee River, is the Mother which also has something to say to you about their children...
I am a lost soldier in the twilights of times past,
when the Liberty Bell got a bullet in that war
I wish I was there but in my destiny was written
that I should be a soldier when brothers fought.
I couldn’t die, and if I did…why I am still here?
still riding by Savannah a battle-seasoned horse,
wearing the gray Colonel uniform with braids,
and on my side the scabbard holding my sword.
Wandering for hundred and thirty seven years,
I haven’t see no peace for the sons of my sons,
generations of offering mothers with broken hearts
starting with the bombastically War to end all Wars.
In Normandy’s Omaha beach a wave of my boys
only twenty-six years after from the first one it took,
to make more widows and desperate waiting mothers
in what they proudly called the Second World War.
Bleeding in Korea for some obscure reasons were
the children of my children’s children there lost,
among the promised youth, the tomorrow seeds
to “give” us a more free and perhaps a better world.
Jungles of Vietnam, went looking for grandchildren
that were sent there because the “falling” dominoes,
over fifty-six thousand of hearts so full of illusions
one by one for ever stopping in that forsaken land I saw.
A soldier that is lost in conflicts of times past twilights,
ask one old Colonel wearing gray embroidered with gold,
why the children of my children’s children had no peace,
when the fields should be full of wheat and of death not.
I wish to go back to the magnolia trees alleys of yesterday,
where a southern belle by the Santee river gave me love
to last forever, but now, utterly alone, I am wandering
on a land that was, of gentlemen with honor on their words.
Twilights of times past, please don’t send
more of my children to fight your wars.
This poem touches my heart and soul. It conveys the tragedy of war and its impact on our children and other generations to come. Peace seems to be a word in the dictionary rather that an action that we perpetuate. You, my friend, are a wonderful teller of truths!
WOW! Georg. I am amazed at your true story telling! and then Belle picking up from where you left off!
I learned much here and the sadness brings tears!
Write On!
WArmest blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady Shexooo
STay Positive!
STay Strong!
P.S. This poem I will treasure and Belle's too! Such heart moving experiences you share!
Georg this is one of the best war memorial/protest poems that I have ever had the privalege of reading. It is defiantely a keeper and it is defiantely in my books worthy of publication for sure.
Thank you George for this truly brilliant look at the wastes of war
and how we are caught up in its never ending dilemma's! You are a gifted writer, and i'm so glad you're back and feeling well I pray!
Love,
ET
Wish it were true but already our enemies are plotting to kill more who don't wear uniforms but are innocent civilians going about there daily business only to have another 9/11/01 blow up in their faces.
You are holding Americas heart in the palm of your hands,caressing it's pain and happiness all at once, a wonderful expression of hope and peace. Peace and Blessings onto friend! Jasmin Horst
Twilight of past time is a beautiful write
Filled with sadness !!!!
Beautiful words of wisdom!
Magnificent Piece!!
Peace Love and Light.....Hugssssssss....Morning Star
A most beautiful poem, Georg...with a sadness from the heart of a soldier that evokes our own sadness of history. Surely a worthy poem for National Poetry Month, it is!
Twilights of times past, please don’t send
more of my children to fight your wars. The world should pay heed to this lofty call. This is a masterpiece of war poetry and an eye opening to peace lovers all over the world. Thanks George of this great offering.
Powerfully penned sadness, Georg - those that forget history are condemned to repeat it - welcome back, you've been missed, hope you're feeling better -
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on April 17, 2008
Nice to read you again,great writing sweet man,very nice indeed...have a wonderful and safe day...Hugssssssss
Wars, rumors of wars. This poem ripped my heart into pieces. Oh what a touching write. Very painful to read as I know it was to write. You are a true poet my friend, for you know how to touch hearts. Love,Bonnie
These song lyrics and art are tales, tides and twinkling lights - tunes telling stories of warmth and sun, city and sand, paths that lead, and the coins we can keep in the Karma Bank. Spirit's been bypassed for sorrow, dreaming of a better tomorrow .
God bless you. Kathy
I learned much here and the sadness brings tears!
Write On!
WArmest blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady Shexooo
STay Positive!
STay Strong!
P.S. This poem I will treasure and Belle's too! Such heart moving experiences you share!
Thank you.
Cryssa
I have posted "Twilight of times past" on the POETRY'S PAGE FOR THE NATIONAL POETRY MONTH. THE FOLLOWING IS THE link:
http://creativethinkersintl.ning.com/forum/topic/show?id=1105089%3ATopic%3A28584&page=1&commentId=1105089%3AComment%3A30672&x=1#1105089Comment30672
I have enjoyed the reading of "Twilight of times past".
Thank You for adding value to Poetry.
In respect and admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
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Christine
and how we are caught up in its never ending dilemma's! You are a gifted writer, and i'm so glad you're back and feeling well I pray!
Love,
ET
This poem Is Very Powerful Piece George!
I am glad you are feeling better!
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie
Filled with sadness !!!!
Beautiful words of wisdom!
Magnificent Piece!!
Peace Love and Light.....Hugssssssss....Morning Star
Peace ~~ Micke
more of my children to fight your wars. The world should pay heed to this lofty call. This is a masterpiece of war poetry and an eye opening to peace lovers all over the world. Thanks George of this great offering.
(((HUGS))), much love, and prayers~ As always, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :(
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(