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The Roman Soldier
by Georg E Mateos → (All Poetry by Georg E Mateos)
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Always I thought that something was missing in the Christmas pictures to make them more autentic.
You will be the judge.


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Going back to his garrison a Roman soldier
happened of a humble house stable to go by,
low voice speaking few people was there,
curiosity grab the soldier, he had plenty time
for no getting in trouble and reach his post
which considering it was a very boring task.

Recognizing a few shepherds with their dogs
he thought maybe there was a game of dice,
a few pieces of silvers will never be to many
he “was” a Roman soldier and so he decided
to try, praying for luck to the Goddess Fortuna
in such a peaceful, for him, Bethlehem’s night.

There most be some rich Arabs there, three
camels where tied and waiting by the side,
the smell of incense and myrrh hit the nostrils
as the soldier was approaching the house and
being so tall he could see that there was no game
just a couple of Jews and a crib holding a child.

But that there were three rich Arabs, he could see
their clothes were for kings, he was certainly right,
“it’s the Messiah” whispered one of the shepherds
and something warmth hold the soldier’s heart,
he didn’t feel a treat but euphoric feeling of elation,
he was a Soldier of Rome, and yet, he felt the child.




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 Reviews of "The Roman Soldier"
Reviewed on December 19, 2008
Georg,
You are a master poet, you have such presence in all your work
Well Done "The Roman Soldier" is a wonder story poem from another perspective
May You Have A Very Blest & Fun Swedan Time :) Holiday in Norway!!
Peace, Love & Poetry
Embraced~Embrassé
Vickie

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on December 18, 2008
well written ... enjoyed reading ,,,

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on December 18, 2008
Brother
this is so beautifully composed
it should be added To the story of Christmas,
thank you for sharing this fantastic write
Peace be with you
MERRY CHRISTMAS

William

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on December 18, 2008
You touch our souls with this piece Georg!
I felt the love and warmth the soldier must have felt!
Thank you,for sharing your rich insights...

Merry Christmas,with love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on December 18, 2008
This gave me shivers... beautifully written, Georg!
Cryssa

Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)
Reviewed on December 17, 2008
From another view, your wonderful turn on the manger scene is a story I have never read, nor imagined. Wonderful thought!
CarolHawks .

Reviewed on December 17, 2008
Derelict of his duty, consorting with the enemy ha, nice twist Georg,
Blessings! Jasmin Horst

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on December 17, 2008
A new take on this story that pique's the curiosity in so many "what if" scenarios that may will have changed the course of history.

fee

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on December 17, 2008
How clever of you! I had never imagined the possibility of a Roman soldier in this scenario. And I like the way that you ended it. :)

Reviewed on December 17, 2008
Wonderful write, Georg; bravo!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :)

Reviewed on December 17, 2008

I have enjoyed the reading of "The Roman Soldier".

In respect,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines (Reader)
Reviewed on December 17, 2008
You make a good point with this one Georg. We never hear of a Roman presence in Bethlehem, but they were garrisoned there. And the presence of three wealthy visitors to a Jewish birth probably would have brought more than one curious soldier.

You also bring up a very curious issue. Jews today say that they never believed that Jesus was their promised messiah. Yet we find the messiah title linked to Jesus from the beginning in scriptures. This is a bit of a puzzle.

Nice one, ya ole rascal :-)
Ted

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on December 17, 2008
Interesting view on the same old picture...Ed

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on December 17, 2008
How amazing this write is, simply beautiful! This I will save in my Library!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on December 17, 2008
You add something most interesting and thought provoking in 'the Christmas picture,' brother.

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on December 17, 2008
Tears are flowing with this magnificant write Georg. You have topped yourself with this one. Masterpiece is the only word that comes to mind. Love and hugs, Bonnie

Reviewed on December 17, 2008
Beautiful: even the Roman recognized Him for Whom He was (and is). Well done, Georg!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed on December 17, 2008
Absolutely magnificient. Thanks George and happy chrismas to you

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on December 17, 2008
Many a hardened heart has been softened since this child was born.

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on December 17, 2008
MAGNIFICENT, LIKE ALWAYS!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva


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