Always I thought that something was missing in the Christmas pictures to make them more autentic.
You will be the judge.
Going back to his garrison a Roman soldier
happened of a humble house stable to go by,
low voice speaking few people was there,
curiosity grab the soldier, he had plenty time
for no getting in trouble and reach his post
which considering it was a very boring task.
Recognizing a few shepherds with their dogs
he thought maybe there was a game of dice,
a few pieces of silvers will never be to many
he “was” a Roman soldier and so he decided
to try, praying for luck to the Goddess Fortuna
in such a peaceful, for him, Bethlehem’s night.
There most be some rich Arabs there, three
camels where tied and waiting by the side,
the smell of incense and myrrh hit the nostrils
as the soldier was approaching the house and
being so tall he could see that there was no game
just a couple of Jews and a crib holding a child.
But that there were three rich Arabs, he could see
their clothes were for kings, he was certainly right,
“it’s the Messiah” whispered one of the shepherds
and something warmth hold the soldier’s heart,
he didn’t feel a treat but euphoric feeling of elation,
he was a Soldier of Rome, and yet, he felt the child.
Georg,
You are a master poet, you have such presence in all your work
Well Done "The Roman Soldier" is a wonder story poem from another perspective
May You Have A Very Blest & Fun Swedan Time :) Holiday in Norway!!
Peace, Love & Poetry
Embraced~Embrassé
Vickie
Brother
this is so beautifully composed
it should be added To the story of Christmas,
thank you for sharing this fantastic write
Peace be with you
MERRY CHRISTMAS
I have enjoyed the reading of "The Roman Soldier".
In respect,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines (Reader)
Reviewed on December 17, 2008
You make a good point with this one Georg. We never hear of a Roman presence in Bethlehem, but they were garrisoned there. And the presence of three wealthy visitors to a Jewish birth probably would have brought more than one curious soldier.
You also bring up a very curious issue. Jews today say that they never believed that Jesus was their promised messiah. Yet we find the messiah title linked to Jesus from the beginning in scriptures. This is a bit of a puzzle.
Tears are flowing with this magnificant write Georg. You have topped yourself with this one. Masterpiece is the only word that comes to mind. Love and hugs, Bonnie
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You are a master poet, you have such presence in all your work
Well Done "The Roman Soldier" is a wonder story poem from another perspective
May You Have A Very Blest & Fun Swedan Time :) Holiday in Norway!!
Peace, Love & Poetry
Embraced~Embrassé
Vickie
this is so beautifully composed
it should be added To the story of Christmas,
thank you for sharing this fantastic write
Peace be with you
MERRY CHRISTMAS
William
I felt the love and warmth the soldier must have felt!
Thank you,for sharing your rich insights...
Merry Christmas,with love,
Eileen
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(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :)
I have enjoyed the reading of "The Roman Soldier".
In respect,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
You also bring up a very curious issue. Jews today say that they never believed that Jesus was their promised messiah. Yet we find the messiah title linked to Jesus from the beginning in scriptures. This is a bit of a puzzle.
Nice one, ya ole rascal :-)
Ted
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.