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The rain & the Lord (revisited)
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How many promises how many times...and we got our wishes how fast we forget to thank Him.
Him, that time and time again grant our wishes when our heart was desperate, Him that forgave our forgetfulness time and again every time.
The poem below is for those that keep forgetting Him, a kind of soft call to make an U turn, that is not forbidden.


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Lord, I was running but no looking
when entering uninvited in Your House,
searching refuge through its open doors
from a furious storming rain,
but Lord, I didn’t disturb anybody,
it was empty to my surprise.

All the candles were unlighted
letting shadows to engulf the altar,
Your son in the cross was waiting
to redeem a soul, for anyone
that remembered He was still there
but the church was empty and so was I.

The rows of benches were so many,
A silent wooden army of rank and file,
I wondered if the echoes where still there
where so many people one day sat,
and the emptiness made me think my Lord,
why they went away? Are they coming back?

I will confess that I felt ashamed when
hurrying by Your empty church I go by,
after all, the doors are inviting open
but I needed a storm to pushed me inside,
and if everybody my Lord, is like me…
Your empty church is no surprise.



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 Reviews of "The rain & the Lord (revisited)"
Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on February 16, 2009
It seems we all been there at one time or another
All promise if only their prayesr are anwered
some are and they pews remain empty
Peace be with you Brother

William

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on February 10, 2009
Your words left a chill in my bones...
haunting words that ask a question that provokes self-inspection.

Cryssa

Reviewed on February 9, 2009
Fantastic Poem Georg!
These are the poetic words of wisdom & you speak them beautifully
I am shamed too, as I am guilty to loose sight of my appreciations, and then lessons are learned over again
Much Love & Blessings Seen
Vickie

Reviewed by RaeLynn Teller
Reviewed on February 6, 2009
Why is it always we seek shelter from the storm in Him?
We need to remember even on sunny days we can get burned.
Nice reminder.
Thanks--RaeLynn

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
Reviewed on February 6, 2009
This is one beautiful poem with so much truth in every line. I can't begin to list the times the Lord was with me, even when I didn't deserve his grace.

Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)
Reviewed on February 6, 2009
This scene I myself have played. We sometimes forget we need his sheltering EVERY day!
A writing of reflection to our needs

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on February 5, 2009
finely structured religious assertion ...

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on February 5, 2009
Delicately moving words, so true, to cradle the heart with....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on February 5, 2009
Moving write Georg!

Reviewed by Aberjhani
Reviewed on February 5, 2009
Much appreciation
for these stanzas
with their architectural lines
of stumbling faith
and hoped-for redemption
persistently gleaming
like cathedral spires
in a downpour of doubt.

Respectfully,
Aberjhani

Reviewed on February 5, 2009
Beautiful poem, Georg; bravo!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on February 5, 2009
Thank you for this beautiful reminder Georg...a soft call from your talented pen is so powerful

Carole~

Reviewed by David Hightower
Reviewed on February 5, 2009
Georg - It does seem that we only think of Him when we're in trouble and are desperate. Especially liked:

The rows of benches were so many,
A silent wooden army of rank and file,
I wondered if the echoes where still there
where so many people one day sat,
and the emptiness made me think my Lord,
why they went away? Are they coming back? - David

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce
Reviewed on February 5, 2009
Nice poem George. We should thank the Lord for all the wishes that He has granted us.

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by H Cruz
Reviewed on February 5, 2009
Confess!

Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines (Reader)
Reviewed on February 5, 2009
Spot On, Brother! God is there for refuge. God is there in a time of need. We want. We want. We have forgotten to be like Jesus. We have forgotten to give. We try to ignore and avoid that dirty Nam veteran who is sleeping (call the police, someone) right outside the church's doors. God is so merciful. If I was God, seeing what I am seeing in our world, we would have the Mother of all Floods right now today.

Ted

Reviewed on February 5, 2009
An Arab proverb, All sunshine a desert makes, that refers especially to the soul, you are right, most only look for him in a storm, or if the want something. Beautiful write Georg! Jasmin Horst

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on February 5, 2009
Nice work Georg....we all tend to forget at times who is the one that has taken the world upon His shoulders and given to us that door into Everlasting Life...

The road of Life has many paths, it is up to us to seek and find the one which leads us to His home, all we need do is Accept and Reach for His Light...

nice, enjoyed...

Art Sun...

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on February 5, 2009
OMG...my brother since we have acknowledge we have found our sibling...go read what I posted today...you and I may not be adopted, we may truly be siblings...What a write my brother...love and hugs, Bonnie

Reviewed on February 5, 2009
Right between the eyes, Georg, we pray in desperation and forget to thank Him for our deliverence, time and time and time again. Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on February 5, 2009
They are never empty in times of a crisis.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on February 5, 2009
A soft call to make a U-Turn. Quite thought provoking, and quite powerfully penned, Georg Edvard.

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on February 5, 2009
Beautiful, very beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva


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