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Walking a Storm
by Georg E Mateos → (All Poetry by Georg E Mateos)
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Storms are so many, but the inners are the worst, because you can't take refuge from them. Storms also can call fears, or are fears part of the storm?


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Rain, pouring on empty streets at night,
a ghost looking out from an unlighted room,
a Polyphemus hiding behind a top window,
a spy with insomnia taking account
of everyone that dares to pass below,
suddenly the traffic’s lights turn to red
and the rain rivulets running on the gutter
will turn to mimic the color of blood.

A solitary walker goes by, soundless,
like gliding by, bad news on rubber shoes,
a reminder of unforgettable times past
when at midnight came a knock on the door,
and the icicle of fear stabs down the spine
the body shudders and isn’t from the cold,
everything is watching as he goes by,
like he was the malign part of the storm.

The skies mood are unforgiving black,
a burp from above, a deep menacing growl
with a following flash of celestial anger and
down to the earth the fiery dragon’s tongue,
thunder and lightning, man will be shaken
when confronting the fury of the storm,
yet, if he ventures going inside the shadows
he will be a menacing unidentifiable form.

The traffic lights turn amber and then green,
the asphalt dresses in a wet emerald gown
which seems to soften the fury of the rain
suddenly becoming a peaceful drizzly fall
as the wind enters with its drying breath
empty wet streets and leave dried corridors,
on a top window, hiding Polyphemus eye
shows no more fear, the walking man is gone.





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 Reviews of "Walking a Storm"
Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on October 8, 2009
This is wonderfully dark and sinister. Very well done. Really enjoyed!

Reviewed by Johanna Fields (Reader)
Reviewed on September 21, 2009
Georg,I enjoyed reading of your poem, Johanna

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on September 21, 2009
The traffic lights seem symbolic of life... the storms which give way to new growth and green... the true color of life
Cryssa

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on September 20, 2009
I have been "plagued" by such storms for quite some time, Georg. Your write is very meaningful to me. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed on September 19, 2009
I thought I could sneak by without you seeing me
Just casing the joint before the Halloween party
The Buzzard

Reviewed by Mark Lichterman
Reviewed on September 18, 2009
Scary, mystical, dream-like quality that takes me down a dark, rainy street with danger lurking on either side. Only thing is, I cannot find the meaning of "polyphemus" the closest being the name of a cyclops? Or a moth with an eye-like spot on each wing. That's really pulling it, my friend.
Mark

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on September 18, 2009
i always found the inner storm intriguing for it allows a glimpse into the tempestuous weathering of the soul ... depending how we endure the storm, will reveal how well survive its conditions and appreciate the clearing we can look forward to when it ends ...

well written and thought provoking ...

Reviewed on September 18, 2009
I know this storm all to well...
and drenched myself in this chilling read with monsters looking onwards (the one-eyed blinded)
Peace & Blessings
Vickie

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on September 18, 2009
professionally scribed details into ones inner chill, pulled me right into its rain despite my gorgeous sunny day here :)

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 18, 2009
What a wondrous poet you are Bro Edvard! you
delight me with your splendid words that capture
just the right effect and I shiver with joy;-)

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on September 18, 2009
Indeed ...
"Walking a Storm" is wet with insightfulness.

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on September 18, 2009
There is something mystical about a storm at night when all shapes blend and blurr...beautiful pen, Georg

Carole~

Reviewed on September 18, 2009
You paint the Storm with vivid lines, Georg, my ultimate compliment: wish I'd written this. Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on September 18, 2009
WHAT A DYNAMIC WORK...VIVID IMAGERY DESCRIBES WELL THE 'STORMS' OF LIFE THAT COME, SWOOPING IN AND ATTACKING WITH A FURY BRINGING WITH IT ALL OF THE REAL AND UNREAL MENANCES FROM THE PAST AND PRESENT...AND THEN... JUST AS SUDDENLY AS HE CAME...HE DISSIPATES. I AM SURE YOU HAVE HEARD THAT ONE IS EITHER 'IN' A STORM, JUST 'COMING OUT' OF A STORM OR ABOUT TO 'GO THROUGH' A STORM...LIFE! BUT THANK GOD WE DO NOT HAVE TO WITHSTAND HIM IT ALONE. EXCELLENT WORK - ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
Reviewed on September 18, 2009
Well penned George. You painted a vivid word picture which drew my inner eye into your storm. Hugs, J'nia

Reviewed on September 18, 2009
Profound thoughts Georg, so well penned.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on September 18, 2009
..the storms that rain on our heart are the hardest of all...masterfully written Georg.
Christine

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on September 18, 2009
thought provoking write-well done

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on September 18, 2009
The inner storms are worse, even for the walking man. How true, my friend.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on September 18, 2009
Georg, you have chosen the perfect photo to go along with this poem...love the imagery and the feeling this creates.

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on September 18, 2009
EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle
Reviewed on September 18, 2009
This is so well written George! Nice work!

With Love,
Cindy

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on September 18, 2009
Excellent writing sweet man and the picture is wonderful with these words you have written here..well done indeed....stay safe and well...Hugss

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on September 18, 2009
Captivating poem.Your poetry is always appreciated.Keep up the great work.take care

EDWIN

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on September 18, 2009
Striking scene setting here as if you could walk right into it, shake the rain off your umbrella and look around expecting footsteps to be creeping up on you...
fee


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