Storms are so many, but the inners are the worst, because you can't take refuge from them. Storms also can call fears, or are fears part of the storm?
Rain, pouring on empty streets at night,
a ghost looking out from an unlighted room,
a Polyphemus hiding behind a top window,
a spy with insomnia taking account
of everyone that dares to pass below,
suddenly the traffic’s lights turn to red
and the rain rivulets running on the gutter
will turn to mimic the color of blood.
A solitary walker goes by, soundless,
like gliding by, bad news on rubber shoes,
a reminder of unforgettable times past
when at midnight came a knock on the door,
and the icicle of fear stabs down the spine
the body shudders and isn’t from the cold,
everything is watching as he goes by,
like he was the malign part of the storm.
The skies mood are unforgiving black,
a burp from above, a deep menacing growl
with a following flash of celestial anger and
down to the earth the fiery dragon’s tongue,
thunder and lightning, man will be shaken
when confronting the fury of the storm,
yet, if he ventures going inside the shadows
he will be a menacing unidentifiable form.
The traffic lights turn amber and then green,
the asphalt dresses in a wet emerald gown
which seems to soften the fury of the rain
suddenly becoming a peaceful drizzly fall
as the wind enters with its drying breath
empty wet streets and leave dried corridors,
on a top window, hiding Polyphemus eye
shows no more fear, the walking man is gone.
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Reviews of "Walking a Storm"
Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on October 8, 2009
This is wonderfully dark and sinister. Very well done. Really enjoyed!
Scary, mystical, dream-like quality that takes me down a dark, rainy street with danger lurking on either side. Only thing is, I cannot find the meaning of "polyphemus" the closest being the name of a cyclops? Or a moth with an eye-like spot on each wing. That's really pulling it, my friend.
Mark
i always found the inner storm intriguing for it allows a glimpse into the tempestuous weathering of the soul ... depending how we endure the storm, will reveal how well survive its conditions and appreciate the clearing we can look forward to when it ends ...
I know this storm all to well...
and drenched myself in this chilling read with monsters looking onwards (the one-eyed blinded)
Peace & Blessings
Vickie
WHAT A DYNAMIC WORK...VIVID IMAGERY DESCRIBES WELL THE 'STORMS' OF LIFE THAT COME, SWOOPING IN AND ATTACKING WITH A FURY BRINGING WITH IT ALL OF THE REAL AND UNREAL MENANCES FROM THE PAST AND PRESENT...AND THEN... JUST AS SUDDENLY AS HE CAME...HE DISSIPATES. I AM SURE YOU HAVE HEARD THAT ONE IS EITHER 'IN' A STORM, JUST 'COMING OUT' OF A STORM OR ABOUT TO 'GO THROUGH' A STORM...LIFE! BUT THANK GOD WE DO NOT HAVE TO WITHSTAND HIM IT ALONE. EXCELLENT WORK - ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Striking scene setting here as if you could walk right into it, shake the rain off your umbrella and look around expecting footsteps to be creeping up on you...
fee
This book consists of a 150 pages of Christian poetry about the end of time and the Second coming of Jesus Christ not as a servant but as a King, the King of kings. To bring righteousness and peace to the earth and restore the government of God! Peac
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Just casing the joint before the Halloween party
The Buzzard
Mark
well written and thought provoking ...
and drenched myself in this chilling read with monsters looking onwards (the one-eyed blinded)
Peace & Blessings
Vickie
delight me with your splendid words that capture
just the right effect and I shiver with joy;-)
"Walking a Storm" is wet with insightfulness.
Carole~
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Christine
With Love,
Cindy
EDWIN
fee