Men revere justice
They talk in hushed tones
Of her beauty and her innocence
But I have seen the unspoiled one
whoring on the streets of this city,
offering herself to the highest bidder
She never was blind;
She just closed her eyes
And thought of the money.
could go into great depth with this one, but I shall stay in the shallows instead.......
kinda haunting, but thought provoking and bitter too..in fact I loved it!
Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on March 26, 2004
One of the most powerful statements I have read today!
Great work, Ian.
Ian, sometimes that's the only way one can get through the day! Just close your eyes and hope it's all over when you find the courage to open them again.
This is one powerful write! Lisa
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on March 26, 2004
Oh Ian how powerful this is...
Brilliant......so much truth
in so few words....
by the way...thanks much for
the last note...I really appreciated
your words of wisdom and will take
your advice.....love to you...floria
If you tend to believe romantic, passionate, masculine poetry is a thing of past eras, read "She Intrigues Me," and be swept away in the beautiful craft of a contemporary poet of love.
Selected poems from previous & forthcoming collections together with Q&R apps on each page to enable audio rendition simultaneously with the written text
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kinda haunting, but thought provoking and bitter too..in fact I loved it!
Great work, Ian.
This is one powerful write! Lisa
Brilliant......so much truth
in so few words....
by the way...thanks much for
the last note...I really appreciated
your words of wisdom and will take
your advice.....love to you...floria