You guys do like the dark stuff judging by the reaction to Beloved Succubus. The Hitching Stone in this poem is on Clowling Moor which borders Withins Moor aka Wuthering Heights in Bronte's fiction. The setting suits both the story and this poem.
The Hitching Stone
You took me high, where wind bites and even summer sun cannot paint sere grass with the colours of life. You took me to the forsaken place where a sentinel guards the meeting of the leys; there you took me in blood and hunger, fed on me, nourished yourself, became whole as we writhed, love-crazy, in the shadow of the monolith. You took all I could give but wanted more; to hold, possess; to keep. It was your goddess who ruled the place, how could you oppose her, you who once said she sent me. I had done my work, healed you. It was time to go. Our love was always of the transient kind. You would not loose hold and so she tore me from you.
I was released; sent away to pay other debts. She is kind to me now, your Goddess, Now I have paid the price for hubris. I was brought down but now she lifts me once more. But you, who challenged her? She turned away from you and now only the withered fingers of age caress, cold as frost, where my touch once burned. The wind that hunts around the Hitching Stone, carries echoes of your keening cries back to the place where you tried to cheat the goddess and sacrificed your sacred heart.
(The lady in the poem, a white witch she claimed, and also a writer, said she took me to the Hitching Stone, a kind of mini Uluru or Ayres Rock on the Pennine Moors, for the specific purpose of using my energy to work magic. I'm a high energy person apparently. She later said I had cured her arthritic spine - but I thought we were just having a good time.
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Reviews of "The Hitching Stone (supernatural retribution)"
Shivers. This is spine-chilling but masterfully written. Congratulations.
Chanti
Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)
Reviewed on August 23, 2004
:) I liked how you said you just thought you were having a good time! This seems like a type of writing that you are really good at- I love the Brontes, especially Anne. Enjoyed this.
Questions, unquestioned discoveries, and answers in parable and rhyme…. This collection records a journey starting with a 1960s retrospective and the first man on the moon, moving to a new millennium welcomed in with a terrorist spin, family crises,
i enjoyed this one--marvelously written! makes me want to read bronte's work--never have. guess i'm missing a lot, eh?
now: can you cure my pinched nerve? :)
(((HUGS))) and love, karla.
Chanti
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