A universal idea in this poem that is well handled. Yes, some of our dreams are indeed "drenched in fear" while others' lead us to have "reasons to be proud". You don't waste words in this one, everything subtle, understated, to the point. Well done. PS: I would take the "s" off repairs in the second line: you don't need it and it spoils the otherwise tight rhyme-scheme.
If you tend to believe romantic, passionate, masculine poetry is a thing of past eras, read "She Intrigues Me," and be swept away in the beautiful craft of a contemporary poet of love.
From First Love to its destructive end and on to new beginnings, Mary Angela Nangini's poems explore the birth and death of a relationship. The powerful poems are presented in two parts with an introduction to her next book My Ontario Beautiful. (Th
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