When will these people learn Ron? How many will go before them to pave their ill gotten way to their own demise. Brilliance is ignorant sometimes...because of what? GREED!
Love it!
Susan
Sometimes it's not an act of sin
But not fittin into their box, like kin
A philosophy different from the clan
May alter our choice or our chosen plan
Sometimes it is best to hold our tongue
If we wish to advance to a higher rung
But it seems unfair that we can't speak
Our heart and still reach the goal we seek
To go with the flow is often best
And not make snide comments, even in gest
Or the ones who rule from the highest places
Will set us up to fall flat on our faces.
Poetically, your rhythm and rhyme is perfection. You've written a flawless tongue-in-cheek, yet very pointed commentary, as well.
Alas, I don't actually know the thrust, here. Have I missed something, perhaps in the news, Ron? You say "think about it"... your poem is so intriguing, that's what I want to do. (email, if you'd like) Thanks... ever good writing, however. katy xox
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Love it!
Susan
But not fittin into their box, like kin
A philosophy different from the clan
May alter our choice or our chosen plan
Sometimes it is best to hold our tongue
If we wish to advance to a higher rung
But it seems unfair that we can't speak
Our heart and still reach the goal we seek
To go with the flow is often best
And not make snide comments, even in gest
Or the ones who rule from the highest places
Will set us up to fall flat on our faces.
Excellent write, Ron.
Take care,
Sherry
Administrative Leave or maybe jail time??
Or did I miss the bus AGAIN>>
lol
Love Tinka
Alas, I don't actually know the thrust, here. Have I missed something, perhaps in the news, Ron? You say "think about it"... your poem is so intriguing, that's what I want to do. (email, if you'd like) Thanks... ever good writing, however. katy xox
Excellent poem!
Love,
Eileen
We are only as good as our last result..
Peter