So, fog on through, your whetting dew
Play in the mist, of dancing, leu
my darling. . . Dew Drop Inn!
Condense what thinks, in altered water...
H2O dissipates... hot air falters
Foggy settings, done, I'm in!
Reserved in reservation, at the Dew Drop Inn!
I like the rhythm of this poem. "Do drop in to The Dew Drop Inn" is a metaphor for a mystical imagination location where jokes, song and dance are appreciated--a misty, foggy mirage where one can escape from the harsh reality of life--a refuge. It's light hearted and fun.
-- unique poem with an interesting message -- only someone with your talent and imagination could write this wonderful little ditty -- stay safe -- JMW
Your Nature poetry is cool! Touching & clever at the same time... But when I saw the title to this, somehow all I could think of was those pleasant (to me at the time) Walton re-runs I used to watch with my late mom in the 1980's. We both loved "Jason" at the piano in the "Dew-drop Inn" (reminded me of my early days at the piano)
PS: hope Gustave doesn't bend left too much or you may be in trouble (not sure where you live exactly - NE Texas somewhere?)
A beautiful write, loved this. I recall that the little bar on the program The Waltons was called the Dew Drop Inn...Hmm hadn't thought about that in a while. Enjoyed your write...the imagery is wonderful. Loved the picture too. Something intriguing about a spider's web! The dew clings to the webs like diamonds in the morning sun...well done!
Blessings,
Joyce B.
Note: Since my husband's cancer surgery 4/25/05, this book content has been integrated into the public speaking content for audiences interested in a sassy approach to personal and/or community awareness events. Another chapbook on intimate love poet
Regis
Play in the mist, of dancing, leu
my darling. . . Dew Drop Inn!
Condense what thinks, in altered water...
H2O dissipates... hot air falters
Foggy settings, done, I'm in!
Reserved in reservation, at the Dew Drop Inn!
Inspiring...
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
I said, Z, there is a motel..
Enjoyed the write Ron,
Ron
PS: hope Gustave doesn't bend left too much or you may be in trouble (not sure where you live exactly - NE Texas somewhere?)
Blessings,
Joyce B.