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God Blemish You
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With Christmas coming, a gift from your friend, Crystal Meth....


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God Blemish You

You faun, primp, purr and prance,
on your way to some celestial dance.

You are an angel that's for sure,
you don't speak, you just purr.

The mirror is your friend; its light you bend.
You catch yourself looking at it to no end.

You can do no wrong. For a ding.
Or a dong, Life as easy as a song.

God is on your side, with his bride, pride.
With him you catch a wonderful ride.

Always on the downhill slide.
Lift your wings, flap and glide.

You pump your practice full of pimp.
And rip your assets like a wimp.

When is it my turn? Me, too.
For what you have, I yearn.

Maybe I'll just turn into the devil.
And put you on the straight and level.

God blemish you!

Copyright 2008 © Ronald W. Hull

11/5/08






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 Reviews of "God Blemish You"
Reviewed on December 30, 2008
My youngest sister has this ride of "God Blemish You" for 20 years or more.....it's horrible what it does to the body & also the destruction to the mind....
meth is a terrible addiction-a death sentence in many ways
Well Said Poem Ron!
Much Love & Inspirations
Embraced
Vickie

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on December 13, 2008
You and I are on the same page, Ron. Please read my poem, "Devil's Bride" and see if you don't agree. A most apt and timely write here. Thank you. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on December 12, 2008
It may start out as a choice, but like alcohol -- which probably reaks more havoc than any other drug [yes, drug] that Americans become habituated to -- crystal meth soon robs a person of hi-r right to make choices. Therein lies the tragedy! Thank you for this strong and cleverly conceived reminder. Warm wishes for the holidays, Phyllis

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
Reviewed on December 10, 2008
A very unusual title here. I think we harm ourselves and sometimes rue the day we ever began to practice self-deceit, with or without a drug or two.
J'nia

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on December 7, 2008
tweekers pick their pimples in bathrooms at Wal Mart at 4 in the morning ... very scary drug ...

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on December 7, 2008
It is a shame that poeple are willing to put a drug ahead of everything else in life. Sad and profound at the same time. Great job, Ron.

Take care,

Sherry

Reviewed on December 7, 2008
Hello Ronald,

A catchy title this is- but drug abuse or overuse is a choice and the consequences is the user's reward, not a God's reaction. The photo helps a lot to get a morbid message across and perfects the poem.

Cynthia

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on December 7, 2008
poetic excellence, with a stark slap that rocks the senses
"God Blemish you" is hard to get past, but it works in this poem!

Eileen

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on December 7, 2008
You need to go cold turkey for that affliction Ron
Anyways diet coke is better for you..;)
The secret is not to look in the mirror too often.

Peter

Reviewed by Michael Guy
Reviewed on December 7, 2008
If this is a comment on drug use for any reason, therapeutic or not; it's a powerful and true one. Had a little trouble with the "God" connection except anything that sells an easy solution, drugs, religion or anything is more brainwashing. Modern medical science does many wonderful things but most have a heavy side price to pay. (no need to tell you or myself that!)There are no easy cures. As for addiction - 2 choices: quit cold or die!
As usual you are not afraid to tread troubled waters...

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on December 7, 2008
wow, this is a powerful write Ron -- the photos are so stark and the contrast so dramatic -- life from a vial, a life truly vile -- peace and love to you my friend -- JMW


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