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Advice
by Karen C Vanderlaan → (All Poetry by Karen C Vanderlaan)
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just some random rambling thoughts....


Poem Artwork

As children we enter this world


And attack life with great gusto and wild abandon


Climbing trees and scaling walls


Running always, no time to walk


So much to see and experience


In the magic of every day life


 


But this exuberance is slowly squelched


And careless injuries are hopefully avoided:


“Be careful!”  “Pay attention!”,


“Watch where you are going!”


“Slow down!”,  “You’ll get dirty!”


“You might get hurt!”


 


So as we come of age


Some with more grace than others


Life’s zest becomes laced with wisdom


And we finally take head of the absolute importance to:


 


“Be careful”, of yourself and of others too


“Pay attention”-the world is still so full of daily wonders


“Watch where you are going”, some routes are so treacherous


“Slow down”, yes-enjoy the journey, don’t miss the miracles


“You’ll get dirty”, you will, but some water and soul searching are sure to cleanse


“You might get hurt”, of course-and you might hurt others as well


 


So, travel on, relish the journey and heed the advice of old


Its meaning runs so very much deeper than I ever thought


As I have uttered and do, those very same phrases


To my children and grandchild as they, too, travel on


 


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 Reviews of "Advice"
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on February 22, 2008
Karen, how beautiful this is...and the advice...just perfect! Words to live by-

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on July 26, 2007
As one bloke said. "All men die, but few ever live."

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on July 25, 2007
This is good enough to be on a plaque!!!!!

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on July 24, 2007
A beautiful picture and wise words of wisdom heard and learned.............M

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on July 23, 2007
wise & cleverly penned ...

Reviewed by Barbara Smith
Reviewed on July 23, 2007
Karen, loved the picture and the poem is so true of life! I enjoyed this a lot.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on July 23, 2007
Love the photo with your wise message/poem
Beautifully written of how we all learn and
teach in turn what we have experienced...

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on July 23, 2007
This reminds me of advice once given to me and passed on to my children and grandkids. Yhank you for your advice.


Rose

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on July 23, 2007
Karen,
Thank you for this connection. We truly live a blessed life. We must be careful not to squash our spirits and just live life to the fullest!
Wonderful poem here.

Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on July 23, 2007
“You’ll get dirty”, you will, but some water and soul searching are sure to cleanse
"You might get hurt”, of course-and you might hurt others as well

All so very true, and all a part of this thing we call 'life.' And what a great photo, Karen!







Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on July 23, 2007
Ah yes, the voice of wisdom of our parents...I very well remember one incident that my mom and I both can laugh about now. I was five, we were walking up the many winding concrete steps that lead up the hill to my grandmother's house. We had just stopped in at her little country grocery store after Sunday night service for a good cold Pepsi. Well this being in the year 1968 the bottles were returnable glass bottles, not the plastic that we've become so accustomed to today. I had just reached and got my pop as the many steps were tiring. My mom had no sooner said, "be careful, don't fall with that bottle!" When guess what? My mom's voice distracted me from carrying the big twelve ounce bottle and I missed a step, down I went and away to the emergency room we went! Eighteen stitches in all. Two very sore hands, and much missed school work and never again was I allowed to carry a glass bottle while walking! It seems every time that someone told me to be careful something always happened! Just a big coincidence I suppose! Enjoyed the write and the trip down memory lane!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on July 22, 2007
Creative and wise beyond your years. :) 'Pea' xxxxxxxooooooxxxxxX

Reviewed by Rafiriio Daniels
Reviewed on July 22, 2007
Nice work!!! It takes poets like u to help keep poetry alive!!!!!

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on July 22, 2007
i adore this clever twist on those common childhood protections...nicely done...this is worth submitting somewhere

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on July 22, 2007
Good words and great picture. Lady J

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on July 22, 2007
Yes the advice we offer our children and then watch them offer to their own young is the wisdom of the ages and yet each parent tends to think they are the origiantors of advice. Love it and the little girl is gorgeous.

Fee

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on July 22, 2007
First, let me say that panoramic view is spectacular. Great photography.

The way you compare and contrast those particualr commands made to childrn when they are young and later must live by in adult years is extremely interesting. I was told all those things growing up. Oddly, it must had taken root, because as in your poem, I still adhere to the wisdom of "being careful", "paying attention", etc.

An excellent write.
Jeanette

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on July 22, 2007
Karen, great advice and I love the expression on the little girls face as she rides her bike...well done.

Peace,
Dan

Reviewed by Nicky Goodman
Reviewed on July 22, 2007
Perfectly brilliant! Lovely read :)

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on July 22, 2007
Can totally get with this, Karen. Life's limitations become life's liberations perhaps a few years' down the line, as our attitudes and perceptions change with every season and phase of life and experience. Moment by moment, life IN ALL ITS FULNESS, GOOD AND BAD, perhaps becomes a breath to savour for all it's worth. Well, I'm starting to learn so, at least! :)) Ramble on, Rose! Love Kate xx

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on July 22, 2007
Moment to moment wisdom <>Always knowing your doing the best you can-For those who seem unresolved with intentions -It's still the best they are prepared for - Without fear forward yourself to evolving into your best self-{Good work}-love <>Ted

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on July 22, 2007
Wonderful poem on how life is seen and lived and therein it contains much sage advice. Love the pic in a glorious mountain setting.


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