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Waiting Like a Perfect Lady
by Karen C Vanderlaan → (All Poetry by Karen C Vanderlaan)
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Waiting like a Perfect Lady

 

She was finally going to see him,

It had been such a long time,

And even though they had written,

(Him more than she),

For he had more empty hours on his hands.

 

He had gotten himself into trouble,

Too big a problem for a simple ‘time out’,

He had been locked away for a while,

She hoped he was working things out.

 

So this long awaited day had arrived,

She bathed in bubbles and washed her hair,

In strawberry scented shampoo.

She dressed in a lovely dress of blue,

To match her eyes and his.

 

She was so excited she could barely sit still,

But she sat and waited like a perfect lady,

Her legs were crossed and still,

Her hands folded sweetly in her lap.

 

Then he arrived with his hands held wide,

In wild abandon she jumped up to greet her daddy,

She ran with arms flailing, and leaped into his arms,

Her body wriggling in giggles of joy.

 

I hope he knows how much love is held in that soul,

And how choosing drugs over life,

Sends such a sad message, of self doubt,

And questions of why she’s not good enough,

To keep him being her daddy,

Instead of an addict to something,

She cannot possibly comprehend.

 


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 Reviews of "Waiting Like a Perfect Lady"
Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on August 7, 2009
Heart touching. Sadly many adults are adrift in life for one reason or another and children seem to bear the brunt of thier parents emotional instability...GOOD WRITE!....M

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 5, 2009
Truly heartfelt, and what a marvelous reunion, for both of them.

Reviewed by Daniel Keith
Reviewed on August 4, 2009
Nicely written Karen. I know the pains of addiction all to well, as I have now been drug free for over 2 years. May God Bless You.

Daniel

Reviewed on August 4, 2009
Dear Karen,
I've been lax in commenting on your latest poems, please forgive me. My life has been very hectic of late. Knowing the story behind this poem made it brought tears of happiness. He's a well man now, you can tell by the gleam in his eyes.
Fondly,
Marcia

Reviewed on August 4, 2009
Complete joy, and yet bittersweet in depth. Very nicely done, Karen. Addiction is a terrible foe, and it seems we all have it to one degree or another, to one substance or another.

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on August 4, 2009
MAY THE GRACE AND MERCY OF A GOOD GOD BE WITH THIS YOUNG MAN AND MAY HE BE GIVEN THE STRENGTH HE NEEDS TO CHOOSE HIS LOVELY LITTLE DAUGHTER OVER ANY ADDICTION. ONLY PRAYER CAN MAKE THE DIFFERENCE. THANKS FOR SHARING THIS WONDERFUL WRITE AND THE BEAUTIFUL PICTURE. GOD BLESS YOU AND YOURS ALWAYS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on August 4, 2009
this completely breaks me, Karen, as it reflects so much anguish in my own child's heart, having lived in the absence of an alcoholic schizophrenic father. You have told this story perfectly and the beauty in your picture amplifies it fully. They are both so young... may they grow together to bond fully and build each other fully into the man and woman they are destined to become, held together by the deep, deep love they share. This is melting. Bless you, Kate xx

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on August 4, 2009
This is so beautiful, just wonderfully inspiring, Karen.
Hoping for the best for them.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on August 4, 2009
This is a story that both fills me with sadness and happiness. My own nephew and his girlfriend chose drugs over their child eventually abandoning her at four years old. Luckily my sister was there for her and she is in the final stages of adopting her as her own child. I am happy that this young man may have received the help he needed in time to become a father to this sweet innocent child.

hugs
fee

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on August 4, 2009
...yes.the photo says it all Karen!

Reviewed on August 4, 2009
May their relationship grow as she does. Beautiful pen.

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on August 4, 2009
May this story continue having good endings.

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed on August 4, 2009
oh Karen, this is such an emotive poem with so much value to the purity of love for our children & the importance of a parent in their lives...addiction is devastating
Peace, Love & Inspirations
Vickie

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on August 4, 2009
WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on August 4, 2009
Some are blessed, maybe even touched by an angel of reason, coming to their senses and at last put the horse in front of the carriage and not the other way around, putting family before addiction. Yes, they are the blessed one that will fill with joy any Perfect Little Lady.

Georg


Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on August 4, 2009
Again, Karen, you touch the heart through your words.....so full of honest emotion.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on August 3, 2009
Praise God that he has kicked the habit and came home to his loved ones.


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