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Hallowed Ground
by Karen C Vanderlaan → (All Poetry by Karen C Vanderlaan)
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Have just returned from ten days back east-first, home to the Vermont farm where i was raised to spread my father's ashes....


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Hallowed Ground

 

His ashes arrived at my brothers'

In a blue cardboard box with a label.

But that wouldn't do for our father,

So we, my brother, sister and I,

Made him a box of blue maple.

 

Blue for the sad of saying good-bye too soon,

To our father so loved by us all,

And the maple so lovely, a cousin,

To the trees on the hills of Vermont.

 

We measured (at least twice),

Then made each cut, then sanded each rough edge,

We smoothed each side and top and bottom,

With mineral oil and love.

 

In one corner we tucked a baseball,

Then gently and somberly put in the ashes,

(With a tear as the reality struck us)

And tied the box with a simple leather tie.

 

And we knew that it was good,

We looked at each other with pride,

For this was a fitting box for our dad,

With the warmth of the wood,

And the love of his kids.

 

So, on this hallowed ground (his and ours),

We sent some of his ashes out,

On the gentle Vermont breeze,

Over the hill overlooking our paradise.


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 Reviews of "Hallowed Ground"
Reviewed on August 23, 2009
kind of sad and joyful at the same time Karen, great poetic story in relation to a life occurring event, cheers

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on August 18, 2009
The poem touches ones heart to its core! Its sad , yet I could feel the love and respect that are in the lines. What a loving tribute for him and to him. He will forever be a part of those beautiful green mountains of Vermont.. Blessings to you.....M

Reviewed on August 18, 2009
Dear Karen,
Every line in this heart breaking poem is filled with love, I could feel it. I'm so happy your sister was there with you.
Love,
Marcia

Reviewed on August 18, 2009
A memory that you'll all carry with you for the rest of your lives. He lives on in you. Well done.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on August 18, 2009
..very beautiful Karen..and memories will forever fill in those hollow places

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on August 18, 2009
Daughters seems to have that special feeling for their Dads as it is so well expressed here.

Georg


Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on August 18, 2009
Beautiful write Karen as a loving Dad deserved the best. Love has filled each line you have shared. Thank you.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on August 18, 2009
Very tender write and as a father I would like to think that my children would think so lovingly of what I would like if anything happened to me. So much love here...

hugs
fee

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on August 17, 2009
Beautiful love and respect shown for your dad. God Bless him and may he rest in peace.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on August 17, 2009
The style with which you've written this is so lovely...so honest...it's a keeper, Karen.


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