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Crawling into the way, way back of her closet, created behind the eaves Far side of the get up’s for this season, and in back of the garb for next
Quieted, in her hiding spot, that no one knew about . . . a feat in itself, for herself She’d fret, if ever, having her swear to, if she were asked to, keep a secret!
Thither on the ceiling, she drew pictures and penciled in her life’s memories Remembering . . . while lying there, on a heap of old, neglected stuffed animals She rationalized. . . .
Time, as it brings her other places, someone might find this, her prescience, knows what that she’s about . . . and with whom she did, done, and had her doubts, and all her sins . . . "God forbid!", she spit . . .and erased it!
Copyright 2007 Kimmy Van Kooten
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well done pen...
John
nice work.....
Art Sun...
George
Love it!!
Chrissy
This works beautifully as a metaphor as well as a physical place. A place within, most secret, private where we must go to listen, reflect, heal and move on. Loved the imagery and the message.
Jerelyn
Blessings,
Joyce B.
Love how you kind of seperated her prescience, or fore-knowledge of things, and made it a muse of sorts looking out for her. I enjoyed this Kimmy friend.
Blessings ...
Richard
can't erase it so...I say
be happy with who you are.
No one else like you Kimmy!
I can relate though to destroying
my journals, but then thought better
of it. I Am What I Am as Popeye says lol
Chrissy
Love,
Taylor
A mystical one this is.
Georg
Fee
Ted
well done...
Allen