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Here nor There
by Kimmy Van Kooten → (All Poetry by Kimmy Van Kooten)
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Artwork from the Grateful Dead album


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You saw me here
Standing on the edge
Contemplating, jumping
Calling out to death

You saw me there
Falling through the air
Cerebrating, dying
Breathing, no one cared. . .

Can you see me here
Still, upon the earth?
Ceding, all my sinning
You, killing all I’m worth. . .

Can you see me there
Burning down in Hell?
While I’m content in Heaven
If you only knew,  I fell. . .

Copyright 2008
Kimmy Van Kooten

 


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 Reviews of "Here nor There"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on November 27, 2008
You have me pausing for thought, Kimmy. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on November 26, 2008
...levels you have penned...with intensity...and excellence.
John

Reviewed on November 17, 2008
Wonderful Poem Kimmy, we indeed all fall & stand on the many variables to cliff's edge of contemplations...
I love the closing line:

"If you only knew, I fell. . ."


Much Love To You
& The Contentments of Life's Countless Blessings Den Sister :)
Peace, Love & Poetry
Embraced~Embrassé
Vickie


Reviewed by Richard Orey
Reviewed on November 14, 2008
A clever little diddy reminding us all not to "rush to judgment" for there's often much more than can be seen from a first impression.

I love your work, Kimmy. You are a true "original."

Richard


Reviewed by Lew Duffey
Reviewed on October 25, 2008
A very sad write. Live and write. It's better.
God Bless,
Lew

Reviewed on October 24, 2008

Good one to make me think a little... "Here nor There" strikes the learning mind.

Keep Your pen busy, and Your brush working.

In appreciation,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on October 23, 2008
Thank you Kimmy for sharing a powerful write.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on October 22, 2008
Chilling poignancy.

Ron

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on October 22, 2008
Are we swimming in the deeps of that philosophical mud sea where love and hate liquifies but where you can't possible float on it?
From the picture to the words and beyond, the words lose their meaning as the meaning takes over the words.
Well done Dutch girl!

Georg


Reviewed by William Haynes
Reviewed on October 21, 2008
We all fall at some point in our lives. It's in the looking back and your words that we learn to survive
bill

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on October 21, 2008
Kimmy,
this is quite a voice I hear, rich and deep and making me pay full attention. Strong, worthwhile writing.
John

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on October 21, 2008
Very well written sweet lady...stay safe and well always...Hugssss

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on October 21, 2008
Deep thoughts leaving one to contemplate, well said...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Linda Law
Reviewed on October 21, 2008
This is poignantly written... almost too well done.... I felt the pain... but I also saw the victor!!! lindalaw

Reviewed on October 21, 2008
Very well written. You can inside a troubled mind.

Mary

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on October 21, 2008
A look at a suicidal mind and if we but only cared.

Reviewed on October 21, 2008
Very well done Kimmy.

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on October 21, 2008
I love it!

Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines (Reader)
Reviewed on October 21, 2008
Major departure from your usual artistic styling, and very well penned, Kimmers :-)

Love the Grateful Dead, too!!!

Ted

Reviewed on October 21, 2008
Oh, this one grabs the heart and gives it a squeeze - powerfully penned sadness, Kimmy. You're in my thoughts and prayers - because I care.

Have missed you around here -

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(


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